So, I was really pissed off when I wrote this. I showed it to some of my friends and they said I should post it. That's what I'm doing right now. This was apart of another story, so please just ignore the magic and all that.
I went to my dreamland, and stormed straight to Hinata's. "I need you to bring someone here from reality." I told her. Hinata is a witch, so she can do things like that. I have powers too, but they are limited. "Okay... what's their name?" she asked. "Ino." was all I said. Ino is a girl who used to bully me until I finally fought back. We have been at each other's throat ever since. I was angry so I decided I was going to kill her. I know it sounds crazy, but who was gonna tell? I'm murdering her in my dreamland and someone else will do it in reality. She looked hesitant, but did it anyway. She brought her here. I looked at her and nodded my thanks. I snapped my fingers, and we were in my basement. "I'm going to play a game with you. I'm sure i'll be the only one enjoying it though." I said with a devious smile. I snapped again and she was tied to a chair. I got a knife and stabbed her in the stomach. Her mouth dropped open in pain. I stabbed her in a place that will paralyze her legs. I took the knife and pushed it in deep right below her shoulder; I turned it and she yelled in pain. I snapped again and there was tape over her mouth. I pulled the blade down and pulled off a long, thick piece of her flesh. Once I was satisfied I used her flesh to tie it over her eyes. "This way you won't have to see what I' about o do next." I stab her in the side, and then I slice her next. She stops squirming and I know she's dead. I smile and snap my fingers and the mess is gone.
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