Warriors Rewritten

There's a lot of things about Warriors that I don't like and I've read something on Quotev, so this is my own version of Warriors Rewritten.

First: ThunderClan

There's one thing I don't get about Shrewpaw's family line: a brown she-cat and a black tom have a gray kit and a white kit, I get that neither have white in their genes so I made Brindleface and Frostfur the kits of Moonflower and Stormtail since Daisytoe has white which is passed down and dominant in Snowfur.

Everything acts normal: Goosefeather's warning about WindClan 'destroying' ThunderClan. Moonflower, wanting to battle alongside her first litter, asks Robinwing to watch her kits for her and goes to battle and gets killed by Hawkheart. After hearing what happened to Moonflower, Robinwing decides to raise Frostkit and Brindlekit as her own since her own litter was stillborn, and Stormtail is even more distant from his kits. In my headcannon, Stormtail only mated with Moonflower because of her being in love with him while he doesn't feel a thing for her or their kits and he also mates with Dappletail but one of their kits gets lost and the other one dies from a weakness in her heart.

Snowfur still ends up mating with Thistleclaw, but they have two kits instead of one: of course there's Whitekit and a dark tortoiseshell she-kit named Fallowkit after Poppydawn's mother Fallowsong. Snowfur ends up getting her front leg crushed by the monster instead of being killed and Thistleclaw doesn't go into the power-hungry rage he was written into. He becomes much calmer and reigns in Tigerpaw's aggressive nature, even helping Bluefur stop him from attacking Tiny who Bluefur then brings to camp and Sunstar allows to stay under Swiftbreeze's guidance with Spottedkit, Redkit, and Willowkit.

Bluefur ends up mating with Crookedjaw instead of Oakheart simply because I don't like forced pairings. Making Shellheart a dark tabby to help with Oakheart's and Crookedjaw's colorings, Bluefur gives birth to Stonekit, a black tom instead of blue-gray, Mistykit, still blue-gray like her mother, and Mosskit, a tabby-and-white she-kit instead of white-and-gray. And instead of it being the dead of winter or leafbare to bring the kits to their father, I'll make it leaf-fall so Mosskit can survive but she instead chooses to stay with Bluefur.

Bluefur then makes up the fox story but says that she was able to save Mosskit but not the others. Sunstar then chooses Adderfang to be deputy and Tiny soon becomes Nightpaw with Stormtail as his mentor who pushes Nightpaw to his limits because he knows that he can use his small size to underestimate his opponents and becomes Nightstrike with Spottedpaw becoming Featherwhisker's apprentice and named Spottedleaf, Redpaw becoming Sparrowpelt's apprentice and named Redtail, and Willowpaw becoming Poppydawn's apprentice and named Willowpelt.

Speckletail mates with Smallear and have Lionkit and Goldenkit, who will become Lionheart and Goldenflower. Goldenflower then mates with Patchpelt and gives birth to Longkit who will become Longtail and then have Swiftkit who will become Swiftpaw.

Mosskit becomes Mosspaw with Leopardfoot as her mentor and then named Mosspetal. Willowpelt soon mates with Whitestorm and have Darkkit who will become Darkstripe and then have Graykit who will become Graystripe while at the same time Robinwing mates with Fuzzypelt and have Dustkit who will become Dustpelt and Ravenkit who will become Ravenpaw.

Redtail, now a red-and-cream tom instead of tortoiseshell, mates with Brindleface and have Sandkit who will become Sandstorm and then Ashkit who will become Ashfur and Fernkit who will become Ferncloud. Fallowkit, now named Fallowtuft, mates with Runningwind and has Featherkit, Runningwind's kit with Dappletail who has green eyes instead of blue, and Lynxkit, who I gave to Runningwind instead of Goldenflower and Patchpelt.

Nightstrike mates with Mousefur but dies from the dogs that kill Sunstar and Longtail offers to be the foster father for Littlekit, a small tabby tom, and Dawnkit, a white she-kit with a black paw.

Everything then goes on like it does until Rusty arrives and becomes Firepaw. Like usual, most of the Clan doesn't trust him because of his kittypet roots but I'm making him Thunderstar's descendant and have an OC named Blazestorm, a bright ginger tom with blue eyes, as his father. Firepaw is like in the books, but has Mosspetal as his mentor instead of Bluestar because she knows what it's like to be half Clan. He then becomes Fireheart and everything is normal except that I made Mistkit survive with Tigerclaw and she became Mistfall taking Tigerclaw's place in being the traitor, Dustpaw taking Longtail's place, and Sandpaw taking Darkstripe's place.

Goldenflower mates with Tigerclaw and have Tawnykit who will become Tawnydapple, and Bramblekit who will become Brambleclaw. Fireheart visits his half-sister Princess and brings Cloudkit to the Clan where it's announced that Darkstripe has been seeing the pretty she-cat. Graystripe mates with Silverstream and have Stormkit who will become Stormfur, and Featherkit who will become Feathertail, and then he mates with Millie and have Bumblekit who wil become Bumblestripe, Blossomkit who will become Blossomfall, and Briarkit who will become Briarbranch.

Fireheart, now Firestar, instead mates with Mosspetal and have Squirrelkit who will become Squirrelflight, and Leafkit who will become Leafpool. Sandstorm instead mates with Thornclaw and have Eaglekit and Shellkit who are Thornclaw's kits with Blossomfall but their pelts fit better with Sandstorm as their mother. Ferncloud mates with Dustpelt and have Spiderkit who will become Spiderleg, and Shrewkit who I decided will become Shrewfang, then Hollykit, Larchkit, and Birchkit who will become Birchfall, and finally Icekit who will become Icecloud, and Foxkit who will become Foxleap. Cloudtail mates with Brightheart and have Whitekit who will become Whitewing.

Everything in the second series is normal except Shrewpaw catching the pheasant before it crosses the Thunderpath and earns his warrior name and Leafpool staying with ThunderClan during the badger attack. Leafpool secretly mates with Reedwhisker instead of Crowfeather because I don't like forced pairings again. Hollyleaf and Jayfeather come out fine but Lionblaze is bright ginger instead of golden while at the same time Squirrelflight mates with Shrewfang, again don't like forced pairings, have Alderkit who will become Aldertail, and Juniperkit who I decided will become Juniperclaw.

The third series is normal but Hollyleaf doesn't kill Ashfur, instead she jumps on him and accidentally makes him hit his head on the rocks which kills him instantly and she tells the Clan about him slipping on the rocks as he was chasing a rabbit, and Briarlight doesn't break her spine but instead recieves a scar from where a branch had cut her slightly deep.

Whitewing mates with Birchfall and have Dovekit who will become Dovewing, and Ivykit who will become Ivyfrost while a few moons before Birchfall mated with Applefur and have Owlkit who will become Owlclaw, Redkit who will become Redwillow, and Pinekit who will become Pinenose.

Hazeltail mates with Sol and has Skykit, a black-and-gray tom. Berrynose and Poppyfrost have Cherrykit who will become Cherryfall, and Molekit who will become Molewhisker.

The fourth series is normal with the exception of Hollyleaf being in the Clan because Reedwhisker said that he always asks Willowshine to talk to Leafpool about the three and never regretted falling in love with her or loving their kits, and the fourth cat being Ivypool instead of Firestar.

I know I'm going to get flames for people that don't like my pairings, but it's my idea of how the series would go if I wrote it. And for those wondering about the deaths, I'll put it in a list.

Bluestar's Prophecy

Moonflower: killed by Hawkheart

Sweetpaw: food poisoning

Nightkit: premature birth

Tawnyspots: stomach tumor

Goosefeather: brain infection

Thistleclaw and Adderfang: RiverClan patrol

Sunstar and Nightstrike: dogs

Snowfur: infection in broken leg

Featherwhisker: greencough

Stormtail, Thrushpelt, and Swiftbreeze: starvation

First Series

Redtail: killed by Mistfall

Lionheart: ShadowClan invasion

Rosetail: killed by Blackfoot

Snowkit: hawk

Spottedleaf: killed by Clawface

Runningwind and Brindleface: killed by Mistfall

Halftail, Patchpelt, and Yellowfang: smoke inhalation

Swiftpaw: dogs

Bluestar: falling into the gorge

Miststar: killed by Bone

Whitestorm: killed by Bone

Sandstorm: killed by Dustpelt

Firestar's Quest

Willowpelt: killed by badger

Second Series

Hollykit and Larchkit: starvation

Dappletail: poisoned rabbit

Frostfur and Speckletail: starvation after staying behind

Sootfur: killed by badger

Hawkfrost: killed by Brambleclaw

Third Series

Molepaw: greencough

Poppyfrost: greencough but saved by Jaypaw

Honeyfrost: snake bite

Ashfur: slipped on rocks

Fourth Series

Longtail: fallen branch

Ferncloud: killed by Brokenstar

Mousefur: killed by Dark Forest cat

Sorreltail and Foxleap: wounds

Spottedleaf: killed second time by Mapleshade

Miststar: killed second time by Firestar

Firestar: wounds