Hi, for those of you who read this before it didn't turn out to great but now it's hopefully fixed. And for those who haven't read it, enjoy.
The Toaster Disaster
Kuwabara : Man I'm hungry (yawns) I think I'll make toast (puts toast in toaster and waits, an hour goes by then two) Dude, something must be wrong with my toaster. I'll get Shizuru.
Shizuru :(rubs eyes) it's five in the morning, what do want?
Kuwabara : For you to fix my toaster
Shizuru : It's not a, (falls asleep on the counter)
Kuwabara : Not a what? I want toast! Wait I got I'll call Urameshi (dials his #)
Yuske :It's 5:30 in the morning what do you need?
Kuwabara : I can't get my toaster to work
Yuske :(sleepily) No don't (yawns) let the bunnies have my oatmeal
Kuwabara : Urameshi (hears loud snore and mumbling about bunnies) I'm so hungry (stomach growls) Hey maybe Kurama will help. ( Kurama comes over only after a lot of complaining)
Kurama :I didn't have any sleep last night. This had better be good.
Kuwabara : It is I can't get my toaster to work
Kurama :You didn't plug it in (plugs it in and then collapses, asleep, halfway to the door)
Kuwabara :( Tries to get the toaster working) It still won't work! Toast why, oh why! Hey, Hiei could fix it. (thought) Then that shrimp would make fun of me but the toast. ( thinks a bit more) Alright toast you win.
Kuwabara :(falls on hands and knees) Please fix my toaster Hiei.I need toast
Hiei :Hn, then put bread in a toaster.
Kuwabara : This a toaster... Huh, wait a sec, this is a,... Japanese food processor.
I knew that I was just testing you and you pass, bye ( runs away very fast)
Hiei : Baka
Thanks to those who read it. Please review and let me know how I'm doing. Please!