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The night was dark though sometimes lit up by the moonlight.
It was windy too and sand was swept across the beach of Isla de Muerta.
Waves crashed soundlessly against the caves.
In the moonlight three shapes could be made out pulling themselves out of the water and across the beach towards one of the larger caves.
Once inside the cave , with the torchlight eluminating them , it could be seen that they had female upper bodies and long , thick , green fish-like tails.
The island had grown silent as they made their way towards the pool in the centre of the cave.
The water was a greenish,murky colour but that didn't seem to matter to them since they still slipped into the pool.
Holding hands they began to hum.
A few minutes passed and finally they deeply they said:
''Let the cursed people be left to wither and die,
let no compassion be shown,
to those who commited the crimes,
of which they are accused.
They have disgraced the sea and for that they must be punished,
the penalty being death,
the sentence carried out,
by those who are chosen by Calypso.
We create the sentence,
for justice must be done''.
And with those words they slipped under the water,and swam off.
But the island had known their presence for when they left it calmed down,the wind stopping and the waves growing weaker and weaker as though breathing a sigh of relief.
...
Aboard the Dutchman,a few days later:
Will looked out at his crew , who were working hard , his father included.
Then he looked out at the sea , which was , once again , completely dead.
It had been like that for a couple of days , and though Will didn't let it show , it was worrying him quite a bit.
His father , noticing the troubled expression on his face , walked up to him.
''Something wrong son?'' he asked
''I just don't understand why there are no lost souls to guide'' said Will frustrated.''How can there be no souls,what happens then anyway?''
''I don't know , son , ain't never happened before''.
''It's the sisters curse'' yelled one of the crew.
''The what?'' exclaimed Will.
''The sisters curse'' the pirate repeated.
Some of the others nodded.
Bootstrap nodded too ''aye,it all makes sense,it's the sisters doing alright''.
He sighed ''we're all doomed , figures that soon as I'm reunited with me son I'm to be separated with 'im''.
''Don't be ridiculous , old wives tales , whatever it is'' snapped Will , very worried.
''Nay boy'' said one of the older crewmen ''the sisters are as real as I am,and their curses be even realer,death to all pirates that's what this means''.
Will pursed his lips,''make way for Tortuga'' he said finally ''let's see what if these sisters of yours are as real as you say they are''.
The crewman nodded but at the same time , muttered to a friend of his ''he'll doom us all , he will , even worse than Jones did''.
''Who are we looking for in Tortuga?'' asked Bootstrap.
''Jack Sparrow'' replied Will.
''Aye'' said Bootstrap ''but what makes you so sure he'll help?''
''Because'' said Will,wryly ''if what you say is true then Jack's life is at stake too , and I think he won't be too willing to die''.