I have gone and edited the first chapter, i don't recommend reading onward as it will change at a later date
Eragon looked up at the ceiling of his room in the Talita, wondering what was to become of them. They had been sailing away from their friends and loved ones for two weeks now. All they passed were small uninhabited islands. Though because the way they were maneuvering they had only gone about a three day journey from Alagaesia.
Eragon lightly brushed Saphira's mind and finding her still asleep decided not to wake her. He instead decided to contact his cousin for he sorely missed speaking to him and needed someone to speak to cheer him about losing his friends and family.
Eragon stood up for his bed and looked around his room; it had a writing desk with two mirrors on it in the corner and a dresser on the opposite wall. Though he was not sure if it could be called a wall for the ship was sung from a multitude of trees and all one form.
He walked over and looked at the mirrors; one was a normal mirror and portrayed his reflection. The other however was cloudy and you could not see into it well. Pulling a light blue tunic over his head he placed his hand on the cloudy mirror and spoke "Roran". The mirror went completely blank. Eragon then took a few moments to tidy his room for the day.
He had enchanted five other mirrors to be connected to this one. All he had to do was place his hand on the mirror and say their name, or vice versa, and it would go blank until the other person placed their hand on the mirror, in case someone wasn't in the position to speak to someone else.
Just as he was about to give and go awake Saphira the mirror started to grow brighter and he saw his cousins face.
"Roran! How you been?"
"Good, what have you been up to?"
"Just sitting her waiting for us to find land, what have you been doing?"
"Well I have started to rebuild our old home." Eragon sobered up immediately, "How long is it going to take?"
"On my own, a month maybe more."
"Have the other villagers arrived yet?"
"Yeah, just yesterday in fact, it was discouraging to have to walk into town and see all of our hard work over the years destroyed, and having to start all over again."
"And how was your flight back to Ellesmera?"
"Quiet, your friend Arya was most quiet."
They talked about a few less important things until Eragon ended the connection. Feeling the opposite of what he wanted to after speaking to Roran, he placed the mirror back next to the other and walked up to the deck.
As he reached the deck he saw Saphira awakening. /Do you want to go see if we can find somewhere safe to live/
There isn't much else to do, allow me to eat first though,
Eragon walked below deck and retrieved two deer carcasses, he remembered the elves were appalled when they first saw him carrying them unto the ship, until they learned it was for Saphira.
He noticed that when he gave the deer to her Blodhgarm, who was managing the tiller, turned away slightly so he would see.
After Saphira finished eating he walked up to Blodhgarm he said, "Atra esterní o-"
"There is no need for formalities; we will be around each other for a long time."
"Very well Shadeslayer what do you require?" replied Blodhgarm.
"Saphira and I are going to fly to see If we can find a location to live."
"Very well, contact me upon arrival of any destination you find."
"I will" Eragon replied
For convince and saving space, Saphira had worn her saddle since getting on the boat.
He got in the saddle and Saphira began to fly. They flew in silence both their minds connected thinking of what they lost when they left Alagaesia.
They flew for most of the day and just as the sun was setting and they were about to turn back they spotted a smudge on the horizon.
Excited they might have found something Saphira flew faster and in a few minutes they found an island about the size of the Hadarac Desert.
It was covered with miles of green forest with five huge mountain peaks surrounding a lake the size of Lake Leona. It was perfect with just to the east of the mountains was a plain, where they could build a city and deer bounded though the forest.
Eragon and Saphira looked at the island and thought in unison we just found our new home.
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