Deicide, my first fan-fic, tell me if it's any good, if i get positive feedback I'll continue and explain better
Disclaimer: I do not own any of these characters, SquareEnix, SquareSoft, and other companies do.
What is more important, what you think or what others think?
I was the first one given the news, other than the messenger, he had failed, but he had been killed, that spared me some time. He had taken to long anyway, I thought to myself, 1000 years and to fail so miserably, he was a disgrace. Well this was good in a way, I finally got to criticize my partners "elite" troops.
"Alright," I said noticing the messengers rank, "Private, tell Lucian, and tell him to meet me in mission control." Now was the long walk, it was rare, but I still think it happened to often; it was a mile long walk to the headquarters. The trip was tranquil, but the path was haunting, it brought back to many bad memories, of a ruined childhood, and the loss of my love.
I finally arrived and was greeted with a look partially of fear, partially of humility, couldn't blame them, they must have heard the stories. Upon entering the building, seated partially within a mountainside, I scanned the lobby, easily noticing all eyes on me. I walked past the guards, who opened the doors silently. The farther in I got in the fortress the more easy the people felt, mainly because the farther in, the higher their rank.
"Ah yes, you have finally arrived Rhoadius," I was greeted by the king of my nation. Bowing as low as I could show my loyalty to him, but we had business to attend to.
"Sir, he has failed," I noted, assuming he knew who I was talking about.
"Who failed?" he asked not noticing the case file newly placed on the table.
"Yu Yevon sir, he was killed, finally and completely," I stated, trying not to make myself look like I was blaming someone. "His mission was Class 1, it needs to be completed." As I was explaining his mission to my clueless king, Lucian arrived.
"Rhoadius," Lucian said impatiently, "I guess you know what happened. This is a Class 1 mission meaning it must be completed, any idea as to who you'll get to do it." I told him I'd do it, I might as well had, I'd use this to assert my authority and officially become Commander-in-Chief of the Samnarkand Army.
"His failure was a key loss, it would mean death but someone already took care of that. Since your troops can't complete a simple task I guess I will," I snidely remarked, being very disappointed in my "equal", "Lucian, I think you should tell the General's Committee about this failure, they will be very interested in a failure his potentially devastating." At that I took the file on the table and left with a new mission, Operation Deicide.