OH KAY!
This is my first full-length story. I started it before Breaking Dawn, and after that massacre (actually, I kind of wish it had been a massacre, it would've been better that way...oooh, I'm cynical today) I kind of went cold turkey on Twilight and forgot about this thing. But here it is in any event. Yeah, so if this story sucks, tell me, be as harsh as you want, but do me the courtesy of being constructively harsh.
Oh, and seeing as I started this before Breaking Dawn, it follows a totally different story.
BD my version: Bella and Edward are married (duh), right afterwards Volturi/Denali alliance come to try and take down the wolves. Cullens once again team up with the pack, sans Jake (obviously Bella's in the background throwing a fit cause Edward actually cares about her soul in my version and refuses to change her, oh and doesn't sleep with her while human). Sam's killed in the fight (more of a tussle really, seeing as a full on fight with the Volturi would result in a slaughter), along with Rosalie (tear, except not really), and Jacob arrives back in Forks just a tad too late, and due to the lack of a pack leader, is forced into that spot he never wanted in the first place. Oh, and by the time he got back the Cullens (including Bella) had left (as had the Volturi, I don't know how and I don't know why, I never really cared to figure it out).
The curtains open 1 year later in Forks.