I was sitting in my car listening to music and I decided to write another story. PLEASE tell me what you think…
(Alice's pov)
I had a strange vision. It was different than others. I've never seen him before. Who was he and what importance did he have to me? Why was I seeing him in visions? All I remember is his name was Jasper, he had blondish hair and he seemed different than other humans. It's so dark here. Not a hint of light. I haven't heard a voice in a long time.
All I remember is that the awful pain that I had felt is slowly fading. After that person changed me and told me that I would be fine I couldn't remember anything. I'm slowly gaining my senses again. I still don't know why I have what looks to be vision. I guess I could call them that. I've felt the urge to open my eyes for a while, but I'm still afraid to see what will be awaiting me. My eyes slowly open. Everything I see is bright, suddenly the darkness I saw just minutes ago seems like something I saw ages ago.
I felt thirsty. I felt like I needed something to clinch my thirst. I looked around, observing everything around me. It was all so new. Although the things around me were entertaining I felt so alone. I've been alone for so long and should be used to it now, but now I feel like it matters more then ever. I need to see something, anything that proves that I'm not alone. Then I see a ship. On the side it says "Army ship II". Then I smell the most amazing smell ever. It smells so delicious. I slowly approached the ship. Just as I got there people started to get off. They smell so amazing. I stand there absorbing the smell. Then I had a vision.
I was standing in front of a ship. This ship. And I see the man from my last vision. Jasper. He gets off the ship and looks around. He smells greater than the others. Then he approaches me. And my vision ends. As I come back to reality I see him there, getting off of the ship. Instead of him approaching me like in my vision, I approach him. As I walk up to gracefully, to gracefully, he stares at me wide eyed. He smells better than my vision let on. I see his nametag that reads "Major Whitlock". I then decide to talk. "Hello, Mister Whitlock." I said politely. He unfroze and started talking. "Hello miss..." He had a strange southern accent. "Alice." I stated matter-of-factly. If I remember only one thing I still remember my name. "Hello, Alice." He said smiling. "So what brings you here?" I asked trying to break the short silence. "I'm in the army." He said slightly frowning. "What's wrong?" I asked. "Oh it's just that, I've been in the army since I was seventee- I mean twenty. All the guys think that I should go out and enjoy my life instead of fight in wars intill I'm eighty. They said someday I would thank them, when I have a wife and a big family. And I don't really have anywhere to live. And-- Oh I'm sorry. I'm being so rude. I shouldn't be bothering you with my problems ma'am." I could here the sincerity in his voice.
"You're not bothering me. I have nowhere to go also. And you don't have to call me ma'am Jasper. Alice would be just fine." He smiled then asked, "How do you know my name Alice?" I pause then opened my mouth to explain but I couldn't tell him. Could I tell him that I've lived in the dark literally all my life and some guy bit me and told me that I would be fine and tried to explain to me what was going on but I couldn't hear because of my screaming? Should I tell him that a guy told me that I was turning into a vampire, I would never get older, and I would crave blood? I decided I shouldn't.
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