A/N : This is the new version of chapter 1. Me and the one other girl ( One of us decided to be lazy and not change anything ) worked very hard on this, so we hope you enjoy it. Chapter 2 is still under maintenance so please look forward to it. Team D.B.Y.G

Summary :

Three very different beautiful young girls end up in a world that's not their own. For two of them, It's like a dream come true for the other it's like hell itself decided to come for a visit. This is there story, read it I dare you. ShikamaruxOC GaaraxOc SasukexOc and a bit of KakashixOC

Disclaimer : I don't own Naruto

Chapter 1 : The Creepy creature, the innocent eyes and the tub

Izzy :

Hi my name is Isabelle but you WILL call me Izzy. I'm a 18 year old American Asian girl with black/brown hair. My favorite characters are Hinata and Shikamaru, I dislike Sakura and tomatoes and that's all you need to know about me. If you really want to know, I live somewhere on earth, there HAPPY now !

I am currently staying at my grandmother's house for summer break. Her house is in the mountains… which is basically out in the boondox or as people say it nowadays out in the middle of nowhere.

Me and my friends were walking in the back yard ( which is HUGE). We were talking ( more like yelling but there's nobody but us so…) till out of the blue we start falling. Where ? Down a pit ( or a hole ). How ? How in the hell should I know. All I know is while we are falling ( just how deep is this pit or hole ) we start falling asleep ( yeah I guess it's THAT deep ).

When I woke up I wasn't at the bottom of the pit ( or hole ) with my friends, I was... where was I exactly ? I was on something warm and soft... just like a bed. …. " HEY I KNOW I'M IN A BED !"

I must have said that out loud because a split second later, some person like thing rose into a sitting position and looked at me. It was freaking me out, I got into a defensive position and did a back flip thingy, when that person like thingy tried to touch me.

Sadly for me, I ended up doing a back flip onto the floor, which hurt like hell. I slowly sat up, rubbing my now smashed nose. " Damn, that hurt like a bitch " I then looked up and notice someone staring at me.

" Hey, wh- " the thing started, but I wasn't going to let it finish.

Any normal girl would scream and immediately run out the door, well guess what, I ain't normal. I shoved my foot in his face, sent him flying backwards and only then did I run.

Apparently god wasn't on my side that day, I ran from one creepy creature to another. This creepy creature was taller and looked even meaner. Gulp 'Let's try to make up a good excuse just like at school'

" Hi, my name is Jenifer Frankn'doodle ( don't ask, I WTFed myself too ) I live next door and I was hearing some strange noise coming from this particular... room and decided to check on it and make sure nothing was wrong. Sorry for barging in, goodbye " I then tried to make my way out ' see ya later suckers'

Too bad for me, Creepy creature number 2 grabbed me by the back of my collar and lifted me off my feet.

" Mind explaining what a girl is doing in here, Shikamaru " ' Did he just say 'Shikamaru... no it must be a coincidence'

Creepy creature number 1 then got up and opened the blinds. What shocked me wasn't that it was Shikamaru from Naruto but that he was wearing a heart boxer.

I started to blush deeply and had a major nosebleed.

" I don't know who she is or how she got here, I came home with Choji yesterday remember ? " he responded after getting some pants on.

They both looked at me after that. Sighting I decided to tell them the truth, which was useless since they didn't believe me.

" My name is Isabelle S. Jones, I live in Sacramento, California, USA, Planet earth, milky way, solar system. I have a dog and a really annoying younger cousin. But he's at a military camp right now so I don't really care."

They looked at me with " WTF and is she nuts " looks on their faces.

The next thing I know, I'm being dragged to see the Hokage for interrogation. And since I ain't normal, I of course put up a fight. Which led to me being manipulated by their shadow jutsu. Which was VERY uncomfortable, I mean I couldn't control my own body, it felt very strange.

When we got there, I wasn't the only one there. One very familiar girl was there. As some of you might have guessed, she was my buddy and we were about to cause some major trouble. :D grin

Yumiko :

Hey there I'm Yumiko but you can call me Yumi for short. I'm an American Asian ( Asians are everywhere now ) girl who's 17 and a half years old. I have black hair with red highlights, I wear glasses, not because of my eye sight but because I have to hide my red eyes, freaky right ? Anyway I have a crush on Gaara, you know the red haired Ex-jinchuriki, with no eye brows. I also like his sister Temari, but on the other hand I'm not a big fan of Sakura. Sorry, everyone has their own taste.

Anyways, as Izzy explained it's summer break and my parents are el cheapo and won't send me to summer camp which is a good thing ( for me anyways ) so I'm saying with Izzy and Stephanie ( aha you will see who that is later ) at Izzy's grandmother's house ( Izzy's family is so nice ). We were talking about who was awesomer Shikamaru or Gaara till you know we fell down a pit ( or a hole ).

When I woke up, I was in a bed, that was in a boy's room ( I can tell, I have 3 brothers ).The bed was a made for two people and the opposite side looked like it was used... recently. As I sat up, one of the doors opened, steam came out and then a familiarred head appeared... in only a towel may I add. Apparently he didn't notice me, cuz he went to his dresser and started to take of his towel !

" OH NO DON'T TAKE IT OFF, PLEASE STOP ! MY POOR INNOCENT EYES ! " I yelled so loudly I throat started to hurt like hell. What I didn't expect after yelling was to find myself under a very naked Gaara with a kunai against my throat :

" Who are you ? Why are you in here ? " I didn't respond ( well couldn't respond, Hey, I got a freakin' kunai against my throat ! ).

I REALLY didn't expect the next question at all : " Or are you one of the girls that Kankuro brought back yesterday ? "

That question made me laugh... a little too much for my own good. I stopped dead when I remembered I had a kunai near my neck. " No, I'm not one of those girls and NEVER will be " oops maybe I shouldn't have said that... " Ouch that hurts ! Please move that kunai and I'll explain..." well try to explain at least.

It took a good seven mins to get Gaara off me, don't worry he wasn't stuck or anything and I didn't see his you know what so my innocent eyes are fine. I am currently somewhere underneath the kazekage tower, tied to a freakin' cold and hard metal chair. I'm being interrogated by the one and only Baki, well I was being interrogated till I fell asleep.

I was near a lake with my friends,We were having so much fun. It felt like paradise till someone pushed me in the freakin' lake and got me all wet.

I woke up, socking wet and glared at the person in front of me...till I noticed the person in question was Gaara. My glare turned into a blush, a REALLY really deep blush.

" Look Temari, Gaara has an admirer " a voice from a corner said. I looked to see who it was, and it was Kankuro. I glared and glared and glared till Gaara asked me again .

"Who are you and why were you in my bed ?"

I replied again : " My name is Yumiko Chinoame ( Chi-No-Ame) , I'm 17 and a half. I'm from Sacramento, California , United States of America. I was in a yard with my friends till we fell down a pit ( or a hole ), I fell asleep and when I woke up, I was in Gaara's bed and my eyes almost lost their innocence."

I looked to see what they thought. Baki and Kankuro looked at me as if I was a Psycho while Temari and luckily Gaara thought I might be telling the truth. In any case, my day just got better.

Baki stood up and said : " Since Kazekage-sama found her it would be best if- " I started to sweat "Yes it would be best if Gaara was the one to watch over her " I fainted. I take back what I just said my day just got worst.

Stephanie :

Yo, I'm called Stephanie . I'm a blond with blue highlights French/Australian 17 year old girl. Just because I'm the youngest of my friends doesn't mean I'm weak or anything. On the contrary I'm the meanest, roughest, shortest French/Australian girl you will ever find in the whole universe ( well maybe only in Sacramento...Okay, okay on my street ).

The only thing I have in common with my friends is that we like …. no, make that LOVE Naruto... Okay fine geez you guys should calm down, we like highlights ( even if Izzy can't have any ) and we like reading fanfictions and aren't big fans of Sakura. Fine you got me, we have a LOT common. Anyway all I have to say is that I would die to see Kushina ( R.I.P Kushina ). Not really, but it would be cool to at least meet her once.

As you all know unless your speed reading sucks ( like my mom's ) all three of us "decided" to take a trip down a pit ( or a hole ).

I woke up in a very hot and damp room, I looked around I was in a japanese style bathroom ( it looks like the one in ranma ½ ) Someone was singing... horribly may I add. I got myself into a crouching position and hid in the bathtub. The horrible singing was getting closer and closer. I decided to ask that person where I was. At this point, I did not have the common sense to think how a person was when they're getting in the bath. The sliding door to the shower opened and I should have closed my eyes...

" Hey, can you tell- AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH ! "

A few minutes later

" What the hell was that 'thing' ? " I said sitting in a emo corner

" How dare you call it a thing when you where looking at it so intensely."

" SHUP UP, I WAS NOT " I am still in the bathroom with the terrible singer ( now fully dressed ). I kinda fainted after he came in. We didn't do anything to me except check to see if I had any weapons on me. But he still took my Ipod touch, my cell phone and my keys.

" By the way who the hell are you ? Why were you in my bathroom ? And how did you get pass all my booby traps ?"

I looked around and noticed paper bomb tags, kunais, shurikens, blades and a lot of dangerous stuff where everywhere, ready to shred someone into pieces.

I then looked at this person again, for some reason he looked so damn familiar.

" I won't ask again, who are you ? Why why were you in my bathroom ? And how did you get passed all my booby traps ? "

I ignored him, instead I looked for my stuff, who were on the table just outside the bathroom. Once I saw them, I stood up, put my hands on his shoulders and roughly raised my knee up high. When it hit the place where the sun doesn't shine, the guy fell on the floor and started to roll around cluching his family jewels.

I used this to my advantage and ran as fast as I could, right into the freakin' bathroom wall. I picked myself up and ran again... only to fall down because some idiot just had to grab hold of my ankle.

" LET ME GO ! " I kicked him in the face but he didn't let go, instead I found myself under him.

" We're going to see the Hokage, you better be ready " Oh hell ya I was ready, grabbed his head and slammed mine right into his, he momentarily let go of me and I made a run for it. I manage to get out of his place and into the street. I ran as fast as I could, right into a another wall.

THUD

Ow that hurt, why is there a wall in the middle of the road ? I looked up …. it was that damn guy again. I was going to turn around and walk away but he somehow knocked me out and I ended up in the hokage's office. Great... Just Great... now I have to see now I have to see big boobed medical mentor. Berk.

After not talking for about an hour, the hokage was going to send me down to see Ibiki, and that terrified me. He said that he once made a guy piss in his pants, after torturing him for several days of course. As I was going to spill the beans, Izzy walked in with Shikamaru and Shikaku. She looked up at me and we both grinned like maniacs. We were going to give them hell.

To be continued