Ok this is my first fanfic. EVER. I know the first chapter is VERY VERY short but I want to end it here. You can flame but at least make it creative, not "you suck". That's not very helpful. This is not the Prologue, it's just a very short chapter. It was going to be but I decided not to make it the Prologue.
This is mainly Emma's point of view, Jacob's daughter but it changes throughout the story. Oh and Jacob and Leah imprinted on each other so yeah. I know long shot but hey! It's a fanfic right!
The cold wind on my face was refreshing. It cooled down my flushed cheeks. I still wasn't used to this, this happiness. I would have been satisfied with just seeing him again, but to have talked to him, even danced with made me ecstatic. Having my heart beating faster with I was with him, struggling to make coherent sentences even having to remind myself to breathe occasionally! It's all going to take getting used to. I let myself forget everything and just concentrate on memorising everything about him.
Just as I was memorising the exact colour of his eyes, I swear I heard something move near me. I was surprised, I had made sure that I wasn't anywhere someone was likely to find me. No! Someone couldn't have found me. I wasn't ready to return to the party, to say goodbye. NO! They couldn't make me leave. Not again. I slowed my breathing, and strained my ears, listening. I could hear the faints yells and laugh from the party, drifting down the hallway towards my hiding place. I held my breath. I moved myself further away from the door, into the shadows.
And then I heard it, a door close, footsteps coming my way. I panicked, racking my brain for a reasonable excuse to be out here alone. I was struggling to get my story straight as the footsteps got louder. I listened, my heart beating faster, as the footsteps stopped in front of my door. I could see the shadows under the door.
Then to my immense relief, the shadows moved and the footsteps grew softer and they continued down the hall. I didn't move until I heard another door open and close, the footsteps gone. It felt oddly quiet now. I breathed a sigh of relief and moved from the shadows and into the moonlight. That was close. Too close.
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William's P.O.V
Where was she? The stolen glances, the subte actions and hidden dances, it was all more than I had wished for but it wasn't enough. This was one of scarce times when I get to see her, I'm going to waste it on at a few stolen moments. I wanted to hold her, look into her beautiful dark brown eyes,without have to glance around for people who might see us. I want to be alone with her, without the watchful, all-seeing eyes of our parents. Without the careful ears that hears even the softest of whispers. I will find her.
PLEASE, PLEASE review..I know everyone always says this but this is my first fanfic (actually my first piece for writing in over 2 months XD) and I need to know what's wrong with it. Oops..the authors notes are longer than the actually chapter..