uhm ... hi everybody im new and this is my first ever fanfic about any anime/manga
I have allways loved soul eater and ive thought about writing fanfic a couple of
times but ive never had the guts to sit and write one but here it is im open for
criticism so here it is I truely hope you enjoy ^_^
Black pink and white
maka POV
" Oh come on guys why is it that im the only person who gives her an attention?" maka questioned from her scared friends " you guys dont make it any easier for her to adjust to the acadamy ,do you have any idea how many times ive had to calm her down when she sat in her room crieng for hours because she thinks you all hate her because you never even try to talk to her you just act like shes not even ther she just want you guys to accept her.." maka finished quietly, soul , black*star , tsubaki , liz , patti and kid sat at the table there heads hung in shame " but shes just so wei" soul was cut of by a hard back copy of ''war and peace'' was brought down on his head with such force that would make lord death proud '' dont talk about my friend like that, shes really nice and sweet she just wants to be your friend soul evans!'' maka was on the verge of crieng for her close pink haired friend but then she heard a very gentleman like voice clear his throat to speak " maka, i would like to apologize for ignoring crona and i had no intention of hurting her feelings i will go and visit her first thing in the morning '' kid stated in the most formal way he could " thank you kid ," maka said " you have no idea what that will mean to her. " she smiled and rushed to kid and gave him a hug " uhm , your welcome." kid muttered awkwardly " I have to go home and make dinner for me and asshole here " maka said dragging souls unconsious body in the direction of their apartment every body said there good-byes then went to their seperate homes
kid POV
death the kid walked into death manor slipping off his shoes and waited for liz and patti to enter the house and take their shoes off . liz came in first and willingly gave kid her shoes he sat liz's shoes together at the door . liz already knew not to put up a fight about it patti came in a moment later carrying her shoes but wouldnt give them to kid she ran away from kid so he chased her down but she still wouldnt give them to him " patti give me the shoes!"
kid yelled " how much do you want them?" patti teased kid " more than anything in the symettrical universe!" he cried , liz however sat on the couch and relaxed paying no attention to the OCD meister and the instigator patti " if you buy me a giraffe i'll give them to you." she offered "fine ! now just please give me the shoes." he begged, she gave him the shoes then ran off to play in her room kid walked to the door and lined up the four pairs of shoes he always kept a pair that belonged to nobody by the door so there would be 8 shoes there . " hey kid." liz called , " yes, liz?" kid answered " how come you offered to go see crona tomorrow? " she wondered " well , because it was very rude and ungentleman like to ignore her all this time and she seems like a nice person , the only problem i have with her is her unsymettrical hair ." kid stated '' oh..." liz replied lazily " im going to get a shower and go to bed ." kid yawned " but you havent eaten." liz protested " its past eight i allways eat a eight " kid said disgusted with his unsymettrical timing that had been with him all day
so this is chapter one I know its short but this is my " control test" if you will please review