Warcraft Parody type thing of The legend of Zelda. Seems kinda like it'll be a good one to me
Prolouge: The Prolouge
"Push, push!" the doctor exclaimed. ploop "Congradulations Mrs. Rogtal! It's a boy!" "Oh, I'm so happy" She cried. "I'll call him...Thair. How does that sound?" The doctor then said,"Sounds stupid to me, but hey, it's your baby." "I WASN'T TALKING TO YOU! I was talking to Luke."She shouted. The docter ran away. He said "I think it's a fine name" "OK, then it's decided.his name is Thair Lynn Rogtal." She said. "Look at those adorable blue eyes."
How was that for a start? Bad? Yeah, I thought so too. Flame me if you dare! I'll just read it, and decide if I want to ignore it, ignore it, or...ignore it. Need at least 2 reviews for next chapter, and trust me. It WILL be better. Tile seperator line thingies too. Cool, huh?