Disclaimer: I do not own Lost or Lord of the Rings; they belong to their rightful owners. I only own me. I'm not making a profit from this story, this was an English project.
A/N: This is my first story so be gentle, no flames please; they will be used for roasting marshmallows. Constructive critism is welcome. :P I wrote this story when I was in 8th grade and I've made some tweaks to this a bit. This will be a three part story, I'm sorry the chaps are so short. Sorry if the characters are OOC but I mean really, who expects any character to be not OOC from an 8th grader's English paper! I won't be changing this too much, though, just the character descriptions mostly. Anyway, Please Review!
A/N 2: My mom has beta'd (if that's how you spell it) this but if there are any mistakes, please tell me. XD.
A/N 3: This is an updated version of this story, I fixed the spelling of the characters, please anyone who reads this, review or PM me if there are any other mistakes. Just as a reminder, I'm not changing the plot line or any of this story other than the names. Also this story is a bit AU.
The Island
Chapter 1: Stranded
It was a sunny afternoon in Rivendell, Aragorn, Legolas, Gandalf, and I rented a nature green, navy blue, crimson red, and midnight blue boat to sail and make an adventure. There were four of us on this adventure; Aragorn, Legolas, Gandalf, and me. Aragorn is strong, loyal, and helpful, he has dark brown hair that is about shoulder length, broad shoulders, and a smile that knocks anyone over. Legolas is athletic, loyal, and courageous and has the most beautiful hair that would make even the prettiest girl envious. He has a slender figure, which has gotten him mistaken for a girl at times, and his face puts off an angelic tone. Gandalf is friendly and courageous, probably the most courageous out of the whole group. He's old but is slender enough to be fit, wise beyond his years, and carries a walking stick, which he insists is a magic staff, but I don't really care, I just want to explore. And me, well I'm friendly, courageous at times, and very adventurous. I have glasses and long brown hair, I'm not very skinny, but that doesn't really matter, I just call it being well fed.
So we boarded the boat and set sail. After about two hours, a hurricane started to brew and the waves were unbelievable. We're not entirely sure how the hurricane started, but we think that there was a tropical storm that created it. The waves were so big and strong that we couldn't steer strait. We tried so hard to keep the boat upright and afloat to find land, but the boat flipped, and all any of us saw was darkness.
When I woke up on the beach of the Island I saw Aragon next to me. I tried to wake him up, but he wouldn't, so I panicked. He spit up the water that was in his lungs about a minute later since I was pounding on his chest. "What are you doing," he asked me and my response was, "I…was…so…scared…" though sobs. He told me, "I'm ok now, let's go find the others," I was relieved that I had him there with me, I helped him up and we started looking for the others.
We saw Legolas washed up on the shore and Aragorn rushed over to him to wake him up. He was just knocked out so when Aragorn shook his shoulder, he woke up in a sputtering mess, "wha… where…who…huh?" I told him that we washed up on an island and that sobered him up really fast. We saw Gandalf walking towards us about an hour later since we decided that we would wait for an hour then go look for him. When we saw him, we ran over to him and asked him if he had explored the island. He said, "I explored very little, I just woke up down the beach and walked here not too long ago as you can see." After some contemplation, we all set off to explore this mysterious island. Suddenly we felt the ground shake, then we heard someone or something growl. "What was that," I asked. "I have no clue", Legolas told me, "but we should get moving." I was a bit scared, but with Aragorn, Legolas, and Gandalf there, I had nothing to be scared about, they would protect me. We explored more and we finally figured out that we were walking in circles. "Oh great! We're in the same spot that we started in," said Aragorn. We heard another rumble, than we saw something blackish in the distance that looked like a black cloud of smoke. Legolas asks, "Where are we"?
A/N: I'm really sorry if this is so dry, but I'm a horrible writer. Let me know what you think. There will be two more short chapters after this, If I get at least 1 review, I'll post the next one, so please click that little button at the bottom that says review.