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Well, I guess that I have risen over the top to actually write a fanfiction.
I always read, but never wrote. Now, I guess that I want to be like the other
writers. I got rid of the old prologue, because it was really yucky. I wanted
to make it better and that's when I got rid of the old dustily amateurish
chappie. It feels a lot better knowing that every one of the chappies is at the
level of an intermediate writer. I hope that you enjoy my work. I am working on
a few more stories. If you want to see them, check out my profile
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Key:
"Talking" 'Thoughts or
thinking' ******Flashback, Scene
Changes, and POV's (My thoughts,
notes, and helpful little hints)
{My narration or whoever is talking narration}
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Disclaimer: I don't own CCS; it's characters or any of that. This fic has
the characters, but not the exact beginning. Well, not the beginning at all.
Oh, and the title won't make sense till the third chapter! I think that I
should tell you that the characters that you have no ideas on are mine. Don't
steal them. I don't think that my attorney would like to see you in court.
(Just joking. I'm only 13.)
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Chapter One, 1, Isa, Uno, and Ichi of "I Found A Puppy": Prologue
By: the Cherri Ookami
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{Everything looked normal in Hong Kong. It may have looked that way, but it
wasn't. Screams and screeches came from a little orphanage.}
"You come back here you little brats! " yelled a grumpy woman, about
in the late 30's, as she chased a little boy.
"Wahh!!!!!" yelled a little boy, as he ran away.
"Got you!" Ms. Kusa said triumphantly.
{She got a large whip and put the five-year-old boy to a corner and started to crack the whip to his smooth skin. As the cries resounded through the room, the other little children started to cry out. They felt much remorse for the little boy. Nobody deserved that.}
"I want my mommy! Where's my mommy and daddy!" the little boy
screamed. As he screamed, crystal tears ran down his soft cheek.
"They're gone now! Just face it! They left you here and you will
live here until you die, and if this nonsense of your parents coming
back gets to you again, get ready to die early, because all I need is me,
myself, and my whip to get my way!" she yelled, with burning fury in her
eyes. She was so angry that she slapped him.
{The whimpers of the children emitted through the room. Then, Ms. Kusa
countered on the little children.}
"And if I find any of you near this little troublemaker, you'll be
in a coffin before you get to elementary school. Now, all of you get out and
leave me alone!" she said with the same anger in her already red
eyes.
"And you." she yelled getting back to finish unfinished business.
"You are going to clean every room in the building and if you don't
finish in one hour, get ready to find your old friend, Mr. Whip! Now start!"
{The little boy got up and swayed a bit. The whip cracks made him cry his eyes
out until they looked bloodshot. He felt helplessly weak. His parents left this
little boy to a young lady (The lady was the young lady. She changed for the
worst. It is just like a piece of bread and mold.) And they never returned for
three years. The statement of them never coming back rung in his head as he
swept. He had to have hope, but he knew that even she told the truth once and a
while.}
******Flashback******
"Can you take good care of my baby for two weeks? I'll be on vacation with
my husband." Said a brown haired woman.
"Of course. I'll take great care of
him," said Aki.
"Bye my little Xiao Lang. (A/N: Just
because of the nickname, that said most of who it is.)" said his mother,
kissing the cheek of the little bundle of absolute KAWAIINESS.
******End of Flashback******
He sat there, with his eyes emotionlessly
blank.
******Syaoran's POV******
{I don't blame my parents for not wanting me.
They probably never loved me anyways. It's okay. I'll just live like that old
woman, cold and lonely with no one to comfort me. I can live like a loner and
will never find the one I love.}
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He swept the floor and made every bed. He felt
like fainting, which he did a few minutes later.
"Are you finished yet?" said
Ms. Kusa.
"Almost." said Syaoran, as he snapped back to
life.
"I don't want ALMOST! I want FINISHED!"
said Ms. Kusa.
"Okay." He said sadly, ready to cry.
{He headed to the other rooms to clean. He felt
like a prisoner. Though, he knew that he had to get used to it. As he thought,
he knew in his heart that all hope was lost and that he would be here for the
rest of his life. He looked in his pocket and found a small picture. It was a
picture of his family. He saw himself and his smiling two-year-old face. He
looked more and saw his parents. He couldn't bare the fact that he had parents
and never met them or even got to say one word to them. It wasn't fair. Every
child in the orphanage knew its parents or at least talked to them. Couldn't
anyone treat him well?}
{Another thing that went through his mind was,
"Why wasn't anyone adopting him?" He forgot. Ms. Aki Kusa Had told
every person who wanted to adopt him that he was a bad egg. Everyone said,
"No, no. He looks very KAWAII." They never saw a kawaiier boy they
said. But now, he still stood alone. He thought it might have been a record, a
record for staying in the orphanage for so long.}
{He wanted to leave. He said it to himself in a
whisper, not knowing that other people were watching. More murmurs came from
the little group of children. They wanted to help Syaoran. They wanted to get
him out of the orphanage.}
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(A/N: Good? Bad? Tell me. Oh, aren't those little kids smart. I made them
sound like they were older, but they are only five. I could tell you that the
next chappie would be a lot longer than this and following chappies will get
longer and longer.)
