So, revamp!

Chapter 1

"I fell down in a dark, and when I woke up I saw strange creatures."

"What kind of creatures?"

"There was a dodo, a rabbit in a waistcoat, a smiling cat."

"I didn't know cats could smile."

"Neither did I."... "Am I going mad?"

"I'm afraid so. You've gone mad, bonkers, off with your head, but I'll tell you a secret. All the best people are."..."It's only a dream, nothing could hurt you. But if your ever afraid, you just wake yourself with just a pinch."

"Kiba?" Black eyes flickered back ahead, meeting a older face just like it's own. "Is something troubling you?" A older women leaned over and squeezed their knee. He dark chocolate hair draped over her shoulder as she did so.

"Sorry, I'm just tired. I was having a strange dream, but it was just one... I don't know if I've seen this dream before." A young man replied. He awkwardly pushed his chocolate brown hair back and glanced down at his attire. A slight blush tinted his cheeks as he looked over the dark red and black dress he sported, yes, he was man wearing and was wearing dress. He would never personally choose this as an party attire, but his mother kept on coaxing him into it. He also wanted to keep his mother happy and the end he wore the dress. Kiba fidgeted in the seat, twisting the fabric in the dress.

"Here." His mother's voice startled him, Kiba instantly looked up as his mother held up a something. She guided his head forward and slipped a necklace on. Kiba looked at his reflection in the window, and a blue gem gleamed back. "There, your beautiful."

"Ah! You are here at last. Kiba, Suigetsu is waiting to dance with you." A older woman clearly stressed as she pushed the younger to a particular direction. Kiba also had the urge to stick out his tongue, but a quick glance at his mother and the hard glare she send back, he silently went off to find Suigetsu."It is terribly past twelve and-"

"I'm very sorry we had to-" Tsume offered as an apology.

"Oh, never mind." The older woman interrupted as she hurriedly went off to join the party.

Tsume almost jumped out her skin as a hand was placed on her shoulder. The hand belonged to a older man, who was also the family friend Homura Mitokado.

"Please forgive my friend, Koharu have been planning this event for over 20 years." Homaura sighed as he gave her shoulder a confronted squeezed.

The once clutter backyard furniture was now moved aside so the titled floor could be used as a dance floor. Kiba swing around with his taller partner, who was dress all in blue and white. His pale skin stand out against Kiba's own tan, Suigetsu wore his white hair down and his violet peered at him as they danced. Kiba kept a smile on his face as they dance, but the truth was he didn't like Suigetsu as every thinks he does.

Since at a young age, Kiba had shown a liking to male more then females, which worried his mother so. His older sister Hana and his father insisted to her that he was fine and would grow up no different than what she wanted.

Since his liking for the same sex is sometimes more obvious then other things, people like to assume him and Suigetsu will get along. Which is not the case, and I totally want to strangle him when he tries and flirts with me. Kiba sighed and drew his eyes toward the sky, noticing a few birds. Doing this he accidentally bumped into another dancing pair.

"Sorry, Mr. Inuzuka is distracted today." Suigetsu said as he pulled Kiba to the side of the dance floor. "What's wrong with you today!"

"I was wondering what it be like to fly." Kiba replied as they continued to dance. Suigetsu burst into laughter at that and Kiba sent him a smothering glare.

"Why would you spend your time thinking of stupid things like that?" Suigetsu said as he continued to laugh.

"Why wouldn't I? My mother told me, my father though of six impossible things just before breakfast." Kiba continued with the subject. Suigetsu saw his care taker Koharu motioning him off the far end of the dance floor. He grabbed Kiba by the wrist and tugged him all the way to the grassy area.

"Kiba, meet me under the gazebo preciously in ten minutes." Suigetsu said before he straighten up and walked off. Kiba stood there confused until he heard light laughter coming from behind. Kiba sprung around, meeting the pair of eyes that belonged to the twin brothers Sakon and Ukon.

"We have a secret to tell you." One of the twins said, Kiba believed it was Sakon.

"If your going to tell, then it's not really much of a secret." Kiba said, looking between the twins.

"Perhaps we should." "Of course we should."

"If we tell him, he won't be surprise." "Will you be surprise?"

"Not if you tell me, but now you've brought it up, you have to." Kiba said, shaking his head.

"No, we don't." "In fact, we don't have to." Both of the brothers said in turn.

"Hm, I wonder if your mother knows that you two swim naked in the Havershim's pond?" Kiba asked, a playful smiled appeared on his lips.

"You wouldn't-" Ukon said until Kiba butted in.

"Oh, but I would. There's your mother right now." Kiba said smiling, pointing over to the right, both of the twins looked over then back.

"He is going to ask you to marry him." Sakon said, which stunned Kiba until he felt his shoulder being tugged back. He could feel himself being pulled toward someone.

"Hana?" Kiba asked as his sister turned him around.

"You ruined the surprise." She said over her shoulder as she walked off with Kiba. "Everyone tried so hard to keep a secret." Hana said as she walked with Kiba, who gave her a surprise look.

"Does everyone know?" Kiba demanded as Hana walked with him.

"That's why their all here. This is your engagement party. When you meet him under the gazebo and-" Hana started to say until Kiba butted in.

"Hana, I can't marry him! I don't want to!" Kiba yelled, stepping out in front of her.

"Who then? You can't do better then him." Hana asked as Kiba looked over at Suigetsu, then back at his sister. "That pretty face won't last longer, and you don't want to end up as Aunt Chiyo? And you don't want to be a burden to mother, do you?"

"No I-." Kiba paused, this could be the only opinion, it's not like he knew anyone else who is willing to marry another man. A sudden voice made him almost jump right into the air.

"Kiba." Koharu walk up. "Shall we take a calm stroll through the garden? Just you and me."

The garden was beautiful, hedges on hedges were order around a central sitting area and then branching off to make different paths. As Kiba walked along with Koharu, rose hedges surrounded them on both sides.

"Imbeciles, the gardeners planted white roses when I asked for red ones." Koharu sneered as they walked along.

"You could always paint the roses red." Kiba tried to suggest, he really want to talk to over angered woman about his future husband.

"What an odd thing to say." Koharu answered before she started to talk about thing Kiba should look after Suigetsu once they wed. Unfortunately Kiba had his eyes wonder around the hedges of roses, until he noticed that something was moving.

Did you see that?" Kiba asked, slowing down.

"See what?".

"I think there's a rabbit over there." Kiba said, leaning over to see if he can see it again.

"Nasty little thing, I would like to send the dogs off on him. Now if you could-" Koharu started off again, but Kiba could only see the hedges move for the second time.

"Did you see it that time?" Kiba asked, stopping for the second time.

"See what?" Koharu asked.

"The rabbit." Kiba said hastily, turning towards her.

"Don't shout. Now pay attention. Suigetsu said you were easily distracted." she said, Kiba quickly froze when he saw the rabbit at the gate.

"I couldn't be more interested, but you have to excuse me." Kiba quietly said as he took a quick bow and run off after the rabbit. He ended up outside of the maze and he ran into Aunt Chiyo.

"Aunt Chiyo, I think I've gone mad. I keep on seeing a rabbit in a waistcoat." Kiba said as he walked up to her.

"We can't be bother with your fancy rabbit. I'm waiting for my fiance." Chiyo said as she took out a white fan and started to fan herself.

"You have a fiance?" Kiba asked, he watch the far end of the gathered area, in the hedges he could see the rabbit run under the hedge. "There not you see it?"

"This prince can't marry me unless he steps off his throne. It's a tragedy isn't it?" Chiyo asked.

"Very." Kiba sighed as he walked off. He quickly bumped into someone and he realized it was Suigetsu.

"There you are. Now let's go"

Everyone was gather in front of the gazebo, Kiba was with Suigetsu underneath the rooftop and covered away from the sun. People start to murmur as Suigetsu went on his knees and held out his hands, which Kiba sadly.

"Kiba Inuzuka." Suigetsu said as he bowed his head slightly.

"Suigetsu-" Kiba interrupted.

"What is it?"

"You have a caterpillar on your shoulder." Suigetsu slowly saw a small blueish-greenish caterpillar crawling onto his shoulder and squirmed as it made it's way up as he tried to get it off, Kiba gently lifted if off his shoulder. "Don't hurt it." Kiba said as he turned around and placed it on the railing.

"You may want to wash that finger later." Suigetsu suggested as Kiba gave him the 'are you fucking serious' look. He quickly took Kiba's hands and he straighten himself up. "Kiba Inuzuka, will you marry me?"

"Well," Kiba stopped and looked at the crowd and back to Suigetsu. "Everyone is expecting me to. Since, let's be honest, who let a boy to marry another boy? And your a lord, my face won't last long, and I don't to end up like-" Kiba stopped himself taking his hands back. "But this is happening to quickly." Kiba looked at the crowd, but notices that rabbit from earlier taking out a pocket watch and tap it. "I need a moment." He said right before he jump down from the gazebo and run off after the rabbit. He ran down paths, went under branches and bushes until he arrived to a big tree off of the Utatane property. The tree was old, twisted, and stood proudly tall. Kiba looked around it to try and find the rabbit. "Where could of it gone-" Kiba stopped when he saw a human size hole right underneath it.

So I finished the 6 year vamp for chapter 1! So there as been huge changes from the original and hopefully much better grammar (but I won't guarantee the best, for 6 years I still have trouble with my basic grammar and spelling skills).

I changed Mr and Mrs. Ascot to the Naruto characters Koharu Utatane and Homura Mitokado; changed some parts to be shorter and longer than the older one; changed the necklace Tsume gave him (which will be much more important role in the story later on); changed some dialogue to fit the characters (hopefully and not more OOC); and much more.

Also can you guys guess what the necklace that Tsume gave Kiba? Hint: It was in the series and was destroyed by the Kyuubi.

So, hold on tight until I re-vamp Chapter 2 and then finish Chapter 3.