A/N- Hello! I Just started Fanfiction (Well I just actually found out about the site through my Friend) I Just wanted to say that please don't get mad at me, if you don't like my spelling or Grammar but I would Like some Opinionated Review's about if I am doing these thing's Right! I have ALOT of Ideas for My stories (My friend Told me to Read some Stories before I actually Start Writing...So I am Going to do my Best!) No Flames Please...But Reviews Are Acceptable! Okay So Here is The first Chapter of ONE of my Ideas I hope you Like it...And don't forget to Review!
Disclaimer- By The way I heard we Have to do this, soooo I DON'T own Harry Potter the Books and Only some Of the things are mine which I can't tell you yet because you will have to wait!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Chapter One- Darkness Born~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
It was a regular Day at Pivot Drive, the Bird's were Chirping And the sun was shinning and the sky as blue as you could think of! Everybody was happy!, Except one Family who was not happy at the moment.
"Boy! You get your Worthless Rear OUT of bed and get making Some breakfest!" Vernon a Very Obese Man wailed as everyone was sitting at the table waiting to be served.
"Yes Uncle Vernon" A boy said who had shaggy untameable Black hair with Red vibrant Highlights in it. The Boy was wearing Rags with Tons of Hole's could Be seen from it. He also Had Black and Blue and basicully every color on his skin that looked to be cuts and bruises. The boy limped to the stove, as he turned it on Vernon got out of his chair and took the coffee pot which had Hot steaming Coffee in it; and he Spilled the Coffee on The boys Head! The boy reacted by biting his Lip to stop the whimper's and screams wanting to come out, Knowing full well that any sign of weakness would only make things worse. The Coffee caused The boy's head to redden and blister underneath his black satin silky hair. Petunia laughed as she watched her "Nephew" get hurt and burned. Harry served the Dursleys quickly and quietly. Harry wanted a piece of Bacon, but knew not to get any. Harry hadn't ate for basicully 2 weeks and his skeleton was showing. Literally. His stomach made a gurgling noise that signaled that he was hungry. Vernon Abruptly put down his Bacon and looked at Harry with a weird dark sadistic gleam which would make anybody run.
"Boy...Are you Hungry?" Vernon Asked in a sickly Sweat Voice that filled the room with deadly Silence. All Harry Could do was Nod and gulp. Apparently Vernon Liked that Answer because he got a piece of Bacon and stood up from his Chair and grabbed Harry's arm and roughly pushed him in his Cupboard , with Vernon pushing in the small door. Vernon then pulls down his pants and puts the piece of Bacon in his Boxers.
" Come on I though you said you were hungry why don't you eat!" Vernon Yelled with Twisted Sarcasm. All Harry could do Was Scream as His Uncle Rapped him again and again as he shoved Bacon down his throat. (Sorry But NO-WAY am I putting Sex- Lemons in this Story there will Be talk about it and saying it was done BUT I will NOT put it on here!) Finally when Vernon was done, He laughed at Harry's Broken Form and Walked out of the cupboard. What Vernon didn't See, was that Harry was more Broken then he though and that Harry was Changing and NOT for the good! The Only thing that could Be heard in Pivot Drive was the Thunder and Lightning of the sky as little rain drops plopped on the road and windows, it was as if the rain was tears and that the sky knew what was to come.
A/N- So how did you like it? If you Didn't like it, Then I'm fine with it. I mean Come on it's only my first Fanfic, I'm bound to do bad. SO should I continue or not and also could If you have any suggestion for my story I would love to hear them! ALSO please REVIEW!
