This is my first fan fiction so reviews always help me know how to improve this story and other stories to come. Anyway thanks for reading!
~~~~~~~Pacific City~~~~~
?-Pacifica we have to go NOW!
Pacifica-Octrin we can't just leave the kids!
Octrin-Well what will we do with them!
Pacifica-I'll think of something hold on!
Octrin-Well think faster!
?-HaHa we got you right where we want you!
Pacifica-WHAT DO YOU WANT FROM US!
?-Revenge for you splating our boss.
?-Look it's nothing personal...
?-orders are orders...
Octrin-Pacifica go with the kids I will hold them off.
Pacifica-*crying*ok
SPLAT
just don't look back...
Pacifica-It's the only way...
Pacifica-Vortex,Typhoon,Cyclone...
Mommy and daddy will always love and remember you...
?-Where is she!
Pacifica-Vortex take care of your brother and sister.
I must go know...
*Knock Knock Knock*
?-Captain I found her!
Pacifica-No please NO!
SPLAT!
?-Hello? Oh my squid!
?-Who would leave such poor defenseless children out here!
?-You Poor things must be cold and sick.
?-It's ok your safe now...
?-Captain we loss the kids...
?-It's fine at least with the parents out of the way we can take all their wealth and projects.
?-With that this city will fall...
That was the little preview of my story. I know that it wasn't the best but hey this is a first for me so try not to hate on it. Also I will explain more about the characters in the chapters to come so there is no confusion. But please leave a review about anything that needs improving. Also the whole story set-up will change so it won't be like Name- . But anyway thanks for reading the first chapter of Oceanic Clash