Ok heres Chapter 1. I hope you like it. If you have any ideas on how to make it better and can give me actual examples from the story please do so. This is my first PUBLUSHED story and I'm always looking to get better. Read and rate and needed.
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"HIEI JAGONSHI GET YOUR ASS IN THIS OFFICE IMMEDIATELY… that is all…" Koenma yelled into the intercom. Hiei growled and stalked out of his room. "AND BRING KARIN WITH YOU!" Koenma yelled before the intercom turned off with an echoing click. Hiei growled and went to the door across from him. He raised his hand to knock but before he even touched its cherry surface it swung open revealing a very cranky Karin.
"I know I heard him!" she said stalking past him and leading the way towards the insufferable Koenma.
"Ah about time you two showed up; now I have a mission for the two of you-"
"No." Karin said flatly.
"WHAT?! But you can't-"
"The hell I can't say no to you Koenma. 1 you woke me up from my nap, 2 you know I can't work with him and 3…. I just don't like you enough to go on a mission right now." she said crossing her arms over her chest. Hiei glared at her halfheartedly. He can't be entirely mad at her because he feels the same of her; totally uncooperative unless it involves a plate of cream in the deal.
"Well then I guess the cruise and the all you can eat sea food bar… and your own private stock of cream will have to all go to waste on Kira…" Koenma said coyly. Karin twitched at Kira's name. She glared at Koenma her red eyes dark and penetrating.
"Fine, I'll do it. Come on Hiei we need to pack," she said grabbing his arm and pulling him towards the door.
"Who said I was going?" he snipped while glaring down at her hand hoping to burn it from his person.
"You wouldn't abandon me; a poor defenseless woman; and leave me to a ship full of strangers would you!" she said dramatically as she pulled him around the corner ignoring his glare.
"Hn, first show me the woman I am to accompany and I may consider it," He said icily.
"I shall ignore the fact that you just called me a man and allow you to pack," she said stopping mid step making Hiei run into her. He glared at the back of her head in annoyance. "Damn it he never told us when we when to leave!"
"In one hour…" Hiei stated plainly forcing his arm from her grasp and walking towards his door.
"Ah yes the all seeing all hearing eye has spoken." She said sarcastically while stretching as they both walked into their separate rooms. She looked around her room and sighed. She didn't really have much of personal items that she would like to take with her on this trip with the infamous Hiei Jagonchi. Man how am I goanna survive this trip with him; we're going to kill each other for sure… she thought while grabbing her I-pod and some spare cloths. She packed all her toiletries and any personal items into a small draw string bag.
Maybe Koenma planed this… he probably plans on me and Hiei killing each other off so he wont have to do it him self… smartass toddler with his conniving binky of doom… you thought with a scrawl.
"I WILL NOT BE TAKEN HOSTEGE TO SUCH A TRAP!" she yelled out randomly throwing her fist into the air enthusiastically.
"Hn, talking to your self against onna; it's a wonder why they haven't locked you up yet," a familiar voice said from behind her. She looked back at Hiei with bug eyes her left brow twitching slightly. He glared at her and turned to leave. "You have 5 minutes or I'm leaving with out you," he said flatly while turning left down the hall towards Koenma's office. Karin looked confused before she remembered the mission and flew out the door after Hiei. She nearly knocked him over as she tried to stop next to him only to bounce off the wall and to the floor.
"Baka onna," he said coldly as he waited for her to stand once again. She dusted her self off and smiled sheepishly at him before taking the lead to Koenma's. "A baka onna I may be but I am the baka onna you LOVE!!" she said loudly as they walked into the very crowded office of Koenma. Hiei glared at her heatedly before taking his normal spot against the fare wall. Karin smiled triumphantly while Koenma addressed them.
"Now, you two are to go on this cruise and pose as a rich couple on your 2nd honeymoon. Now-"
"HOLD UP!" Karin yelled holding up her hands. She went over to Koenma and put a hand to his fore head. "Are you sick or something Koenma? Because I could have sworn you just asked me and short-y to put aside our distaste for each other and act all love-y dove-y; IN PUBLIC!" she said the last part sounding a bit panicky.
"What's the matter onna; not man enough to do it?" Hiei said smugly.
"I can act all love-y dove-y no problem; I'm worried about you. Of all the people he could choose from he picked the 'most-likely-to-kill-their-lover-out-of-annoyance' candidate." She said with a kind smile on hr face. Hiei twitched slightly and glared at her.
"IF YOU TWO WOULD STOP YOUR BICKERING I WOULD LIKE TO CONTINUE MY EXSPLANATION!" Koenma shouted. Karin and Hiei both glared at him. "God you two fight like an old married couple; that is why I chose you two to go on this mission. It will not be a walk in the park and you two are the strongest on my team. Plus you to fight rather well together although it's normally in an attempt to show the other one up," he said looking pointedly at Karin who smiled sheepishly. Hiei smirked and hn'd.
"So when do we leave binky breath!" you said excitedly. Koenma sighed and reached under his desk.
"Right now," he said with a smile.
"Wha-!" she said as the floor fell out form bellow her and Hiei sending them plummeting into the blue swirling vortex of doom!