Be nice to me,this is my first fic

Disclaimer:I own the charachters that do not exist in the HP books every1 else is J.K.Rowlings

"Just 2 weeks untill i start hogwarts.Lilly couldent help thinking.
"Lilly wake up time for breakfast"mom called
"Comeing mom"!Lilly answered
"I hate it when morning interrups sleep"lilly thought"i wonder if the blockheads that i call brothers are up yet?"She got out of bed and went to bathroom to get ready for breakfast.When she got there it was open so her brothers were either already up or still sleeping.She went in locked the door and picked up her hair brush and started pulling at the tangled mess.When she looked up into the mirrior she realized how much she looked like her parents,She had her dad's bright green eyes,and her moms wavy red hair and tanned bronze skin.All her brothers had either dark brown or black hair like her father.
'Lilly,hon,come eat"Her mom called once more
oh shut up,she thought
"lilly get out of the bathroom,i gotta go"!her brother James who was 14 and very annoying yelled at her.
"ok,ok" Lilly unlocked the door and stepped out of the bathroom"nice hairbjames,looks great this morning" she told her brother,he had her fathers very unruly hair
"shut up you little nitwit"he said
"James be nice to your siter,good mornin my little pumpkin"Her father said as he walked past them
'yes dad,and good mornin to you to"james replied and went into the bathroom but didn't bother locking it
"Good morning daddy"lilly told her father and they walked down to beakfast together.
"mornin mom"Lilly said
"morning lil"Mrs.potter told her only daughter
before her father sat down he kissed his wife and wispered something in her ear and sat down to his paper and coffee
Lilly favored her eldest borther who was 15 and going to start hid 5th year at hogwarts and who was of course in Gryffindor.David always stuck up for her and never was mean to her.He called her lil'angel insteadof nitwit and that was very pleasent to hear about yourself.David was hadsome with dark brown wavy hair,a very strong muscular face,and green eyes that lit up his face.She sat down next to her father and her bother david to eat a very large stack of pancakes.
"good mornin lilly"david said to lilly
"mornin david"
David told his family"Miranda id comeing to Diagon alley with us ok?"
Miranda was Davids girlfriend for 2 years now.Lilly loved her.She was londe,blue eyed and very lean.She was the only sister lilly had ever known and she loved miranda like a real sister.
"Ok David thats fine"Mrs.potter told her son and Mr.potter didn't look up from his paper.
Just then James and ron came into the room and mumbled good morning to the family
Lilly hated those to,always taunting her.James was 14 and Ron was 13,then lilly last at 12.
She couldent wait untill she started hogwarts,to finally get away from her brothers,and today she was going to Diagon Alley for her this time.Her wand,her books,her robes,for the first time.