Lala: Hi guys! I decided to make a remake of this story and delete the old one; this one has better grammar and stuff. This is my first story and don't say it's bad! But do give me advice of what I can add.
Lala: Now Amu's charas introduce yourselves.
Ran: Hi! I am Ran!
Miki: I am Miki.
Suu: Hello! My name is Suu-desu~
Dia: Hello, my name is Dia.
Lala: Hit it Kiseki!
Kiseki: How dare you command your king!
Lala: *flicks Kiseki and him evil glare* Do it or else I WILL reveal your secret….
Kiseki: *flinches* Lala does not own Shugo Chara only other charas.
Chapter 1: Ehhh! What's This?
"King Sam! The palace is under attack!" yelled a chara that looked like he was a soldier, he had yellowish brownish eyes, tan hair, a green shirt with gold lines across it, and black pants.
"What? Hmmm… looks like we have some guests." replied King Sam.
"What should we do? Our armies aren't ready for battle yet. They still need their rest, if they fought now, they will be tired out fast." said Queen Samantha.
" Hmm… send them in." growled King Sam while standing from his throne.
On a regular school basis… (Lala's POV)
It was a random day of school, I was walking with my charas, yes, I have them to. Oh! By the way, my name is Lala! I'm a 12 year old BOY! Kidding… I'm a girl Anyways, we were walking to school when I saw a portal like thing.
"Oh! What's this? Hmm... looks like a portal?" I blurted. I looked at it and saw that the little portal was humming. "We shouldn't get to close to it Lala. Or it will suck you in~~!" joked Glaze. But when I touched it, I went inside! I was traveling through a black swirly portal, at the end I saw a palace and light!
I finally landed.
"Oohh, where am I?" I asked. When I looked at myself, suddenly I became a chara myself! I had blue eyes, a short pink dress with light pink flats, I had some sort of cat ears on my head, and a tail that didn't seem like a cat's. (AN: I am referring to Mew the legendary pokemon ^^)
I couldn't believe it! I looked around to see that I was in some kind of palace and it seemed that I was in a throne room. The walls were gold, the curtains were velvet, the stairs were sea green, and there were two golden thrones with charas sitting in both of them.
"You are in a world where charas live." answered Queen Samantha.
"Where?" I asked.
"How disrespectful! We are in the kingdom of charas this is Queen Samantha and King Sam." Glaze said. "Can't you tell by the crowns?". I looked at Glaze in confusion and looked back at Queen Samantha. She had short brown hair, brown eyes, a light purple dress, and purple shoes with a golden crown with jewels. King Sam had brownish blonde hair with greenish bluish eyes with a king suit on with a golden crown.
'Wow, I never thought that there was a place like this, I better tell my friends. If only I can get out from this world.' I thought.
"You must not tell anyone," Queen Samantha said as if she read my mind. "If you tell your friends, then our world will be in danger, charas will not be born." said Queen Samantha gently.
Aqua and Glaze bowed down. So I decided to bow down also.
"You may stand." yelled King Sam.
"Honey, the palace is under attack!" whispered Queen Samantha. Just then, I saw another chara, blasting through the wall with black eyes, and basically black everything. He raised his hand and a dark beam shot out and Queen Samantha.
Glaze's POV (when they got out of the portal)
When I went after Lala, I fell on my butt, but Aqua landed on her feet! Amazing! I looked around and saw that I was in a throne room.
'I never thought I would actually come here again!' I thought.
"Where?" Lala asked.
"How disrespectful! We are in the kingdom of charas, this is Queen Samantha, and this is King Sam." I said. Lala looked around.
I really didn't pay attention until I saw Aqua bow down, so I did too. Lala must have not known, but when she looked at me, she bowed down too. I wasn't paying attention to the introduction until suddenly, the wall bursted. I saw a chara that had black eyes, black hair, black shirt, etc. he jumped down and raised his hand. A black beam shot out to Queen Samantha!
Lala: So did you like it?
Ran, Miki, Suu, and Dia together: We weren't in it though!
Lala: It's okay, you guys will be in the next chapter.
Samantha: Why am I the one to get shot?
Lala: Because I want you to. You'll see. And I want all the chapters to be 700-1000 words!( That is my goal, if I can't reach it, I am a failure!)
Kiseki: Why am I not the king?
Lala: Because, I don't like you! And you do not act in a kingly way.
Kiseki: *anger vein* why you!
Lala: Tsk tsk tsk. Everyone~! KISEKI DRESSES IN A GIRLS DRESS AND SINGS SI-
Kiseki: Okay okay fine! Just don't tell anyone
Lala: *smirk* Okay…If you want I can add you in my story just tell me what you want to do, what you want to look like, etc.