The Game Changer

I have decided to take the crappy story that I have written and make it something more likeable. I mean, come on, that story was horribly written, but I did like the thought of it. I want to apply the idea to another story and felt that this one will come out better, the plot will be different and there will be more fight scenes and epic conversations.

The Story Begins:

Goku and Gohan were on the nimbus cloud and were flying toward Master Roshi's house. Goku was excited to finally after so many years to see his master. Also the plus was that none of them knew about Gohan, so there will a few surprises. As the island came into view, Goku could not help but let out a chuckle of excitement. Gohan looked up at his dad and couldn't help but ask "Dad, do you think they will like me?" Goku looked at his son with amusement, and said with slight joy in his voice "They are going to like you, I mean come on, there is no way that anyone could not like you," This seemed to make Gohan feel more at ease and Gohan felt more relaxed and that meeting his dad's friends wasn't the worst thing to get nervous over. As they finally started to descend to the island and hop off the Nimbus cloud, they could hear voices from inside of the house, one voice was yelling and the other two seemed to be trying and failing to calm down the one yelling, and in fact make it worse.

Goku let a smile make way to face and look at Gohan who, he was carrying for the hell of it. Goku then said in a whisper "The lady with blue hair is Bulma. The short bald one is Krillin, finally the slightly taller bald one with the beard is Master Roshi." Gohan nodded to show that he understands. They walk up the beach that brings back many memories for Goku and about half way up the beach, Goku shouts out "Hey, guys come on out." The front door is pushed open and outcome three people. The first one is the bald monk, Krillin and one step behind him is the Blue-haired Scientist Bulma. As Bulma comes out she forgets about Master Roshi and the door flies back and slaps the old master in the face.

As Master Roshi moans on the floor "OHH…OHH" while grasping his face and his indestructible glasses hanging at a lopsided angle, Bulma and Krillin finally realize that Goku is holding a kid. Krillin is the first to react, and ask "So, did you get a job as a babysitter Goku?" Goku lets out a chuckle and ruffles Gohan's hair and says "No, this is my son" As Goku is saying that he puts Gohan on the ground and moves to go to the door and help Master Roshi up.

********************************1 HOUR LATER**************************

The gang had talked and caught up for an hour and they were all around having a pretty good time.

Goku was having the time of his life, but that was all about to change, nothing ever stays good for two long. Goku was talking to Krillin about him training the people at the temple, when he felt two power levels that were stronger than his, but that was the least of his worries. They were closing in fast and that would mean that they would be right on top of them in only a few moments. They were bad as one of the energies was evil and the other was oddly normal like Krillin.

That meant that the person that the energy belonged to a rather kind person that wasn't pure, but was over all bad. They power levels flew at high speeds toward them and within a minute 2 figures appeared above their heads. The 2 figures dropped down from their high place in the air and landed on the beach. The first one was about Goku's height and had long knee length hair that pushed behind his head. He had a red rectangular piece of half glasses thing on his right eye.

He had on a sleeveless black spandex suit and strange rubber looking armor. The other had on the same armor on, but his was black and his glass thing was green, not that red color. They both looked at Goku with interest in their eyes and were sizing him up. From the looks of things, they knew who Goku was and that un-nerved him due to knowing your enemy was half the battle. They one with the darker armor looked at Goku and then at the long haired stranger and said "I believe that is the man that we are looking for."

The long haired Stranger looked on with amusement and replied "Luttice, don't you have something to say, after all the pawns go first" The newly name Luttice started to curse under his breath and after a couple of seconds looked at Goku and said "Kakarot, we have come to gather you for a mission that is of the upmost importance." Goku looked at these weird people and thought 'Thank Kami, that I don't drink, I could end up like these guys.' Krillin looked at these people and without any type of thought started to march up to the newcomers on the beach.

Krillin starts to speak "I don't think you people belong here, let me Hel…. AHHHH!" As Krillin was speaking, the man with the long hair, his tail and unwrapped from around his waist and in an instant, he slapped Krillin into the KAME House. Goku was to slow to see the movements and in a flash Krillin was inside the house. Luttice signed and looked at the damage that was caused by that his partner and couldn't help but feel that it was unnecessary damage and pain inflicted by the man with the long hair.

Luttice looked onward as with his current strength, he there would be no matching even the weakest of the 3 other saiyans that he travel with. The man with the long hair turned his head from the downed Krillin and to Goku and said "That isn't the way to treat guests, now is it? Kakarot, I had hoped that you would keep your pets on a tighter leash. One of them could get hurt." Goku by this point was getting very mad at this long haired stranger. Goku took and step forward and slipped into his fighting stance and said in a voice that held a lot of forced calmness; "If you don't leave, I'll be forced make you people leave."

The man with the long hair laughed hard and long, before catching his breath and saying "You of all people should know that you will never match up to the Elite class. You are nothing, but a low class warrior that was sent to conquer, this planet. The others had forgotten about you, but I your brother Raditz felt that you would have been strong enough to tip the scales on this current mission that we were assigned to do. It would have been too much work for the 4 of us, but then I remembered you. Brother, it is time you take your place at the side of you kind; the Saiyan race is waiting for its brother to join it in its conquest on the universe." Goku just look at the man in shock, but then anger quickly replaced it. There could be no way that he was related to such a feind, there had to be more to this story. If the man called Luttice had said that they were related, it would be a stretch seeing that his energy was pretty calm and for the most part pure-ish. Goku looked at the newly named Raditz, and felt the need to address the situation before it got out of hand.

Goku yelled at the man that would come to tell should lies "You are a fool, if you believe that you could make me believe in your lies, then you will pay the cost of trying to lie to me." Goku started to power up and the island started to shake. Luttice looked at Goku and spoke in a calm voice that lacked the anger of Goku and the craze of Raditz "You should stop making a scene and maybe listen to the complete story." Goku started to calm down and after a couple of seconds, his power up slowed down to a halt, but it did not decrease showing that he didn't trust them. Luttice moved forward and started to speak once more "Look, if you don't want to come with us, we understand killing countless planet's worth of people, there are more things to life than that. Kakarot or Goku, you should stay here if you are happy with your life." Goku slowly let his power level drop and that was a big mistake on his part.

In a flash faster than any of the earthlings and Luttice could see, Raditz flashed behind Bulma and grabbed Gohan who was finding behind her legs and started to fly away. Luttice the first one to react, flew as he could and flashed in front of Raditz and with anger asked "You do this to people all over the universe and now to your own brother, you and YOUR saiyan buddies have crossed …" The rest of his sentence was lost as Raditz kneed him in the stomach and started to fly off again. Luttice fell into the ocean below, clutching his stomach and as he sank from the sky, he saw Goku flying out to meet his ex-partner. Goku flew past Raditz and got in front of him and said "Give me back my son."

The only response that he got was a back hand followed up by a super fast and strong kick that sent him flying back toward the island. I was caught by Luttice and both of them looked for the other saiyan only to realize that not only was he stronger than them, but a hell of a lot faster than them. Goku flew back to the island and for a couple of minutes was out of Luttice's sight and when he did come back there was someone with him. This new person was a tall green man if you could call him that, was wearing a purple-ish blue GI that had a purple sash and purple wrist bands. The green being was wearing a turban that was white with a purple head weight and a white-ish gray cape.

Goku looked at Luttice and said "Lettuce, this is Piccolo, he's here to help." Luttice looked slightly pissed off at being called a veggie, but when you are about to try and kill your partner that could be atleast 2x stronger, you need all the help you can get.

That is the first chapter of the newly re-invented Game Changer. I felt that this is path would be better for the story and that maybe the story would need to have a little bit of change from the average training at a young age or twin fic. I what to point out the Luttice is a play on Lettuce and like all saiyan names is a vegetable.

The Power Levels: Fighters only
Goku 255-weights, 343-no weights
Raditz-1250
Luttice-623
Gohan-7
Roshi-125
Krillin-139

I hope that more people like this story than that other story that I made. I have remade The Game Changer, due to some rude comments about my typing skills and intelligence. I will try to update this story every two weeks.