Summery: Abused Naurto. Naruto is saved by Kenshin from a beating at a young age.(killer Kenshin). And takes him to the mountains and trains him in the art of Hiten Mitsurugi style; The killer style. 10 years later, a manslayer appears as he wanders the elemental nations looking for his next victim. Will that person...be you...More to the story.
A normal October 10th. Naruto's 5th birthday. 5 years ago, a man named Madara Uchiha controled the Nine-Tailed Fox. Minato, having no there choice with kushina already dead, summons the shinigami at the cost of his soul. He never wanted to seal that fox into his son. But for the sake of the village he did. And poor Naruto payed the price for his mistake.
A little boy was running around the back roads and alleyways in the Konoha. Normally he would get away but there were ninja in the mob. And when have enough chakra to make the 3rd hokage jealous and don't know how to hide, you stick out like a sore thumb. A villager with a spiked club smirked evilly. "Time to die, demon." "Please what did I ever do to you?" Begged Naruto. He got several responses. "You killed my mom," "you killed my sister!" And the likes. Each punch hurt more than the last. Each kick broke something or things. The beating stopped long enough to look up. He saw the man with the spiked club approach him. 'Well, if I'm going to die, I just hope the gods have mercy.' But just before the weapon made contact, his head and right arm came right off in a shower of blood. He was thankful that he was saved this time. But was too tired and in too much pain to care.
flashback
A man named Kenshin who had blood-red hair was looking through his things. "Nah shit. Guess I'm put of food. I'm in fire country so Konoha is my best bet." Kenshin picked up his backpack and put his sword back in it's place by his side. He felt several people behind him. Come out! I know you're there!" The bandits attacked him all at once. Hoping for an easy kill. Boy were they wrong. In fact, it was the polar opposite. He gets in a battoujutsu position. Now coming from another land beyond the Elemental Nations, he was not well known. But that doesn't mean he didn't kill for a living. Normally a battoujutsu is a one-shot attack. And it is but once there were all close enough, he drew his sword. And using the momentum did a 360 mid-air flip and killed all the bandits in one shot. An landed perfectly on both feet. "and I thought drunks were bad. Ether I'm getting better or the people are getting worse. Most likely both. Then again, I am in a different country so...whatever." He searched the camp for any food and drink. "Well I do need some foo but this is only enough for tonight and tomorrow morning. Oh well." He ate his dinner and slept in one of the empty tents.
Alright., now where is the nearest inn or hotel? He decided to keep walking. Well this place looks nice. The Fireball hotel. Nice.
"Hello sir. Is there an open room on the 2nd floor?" "Why yes there is sir. Right this way." And there you go. Enjoy your stay." "Thank you." I think I'm going to be here for a while so I might as well do some exploring."
Kenshin's eyes suddenly turned a very dangerous shade of gold. "What's going on here?!" A dumb ass villagers said, "Well about to kill the demon for what he did to us!" And that is what sealed his fate. "Trash like you don't deserve to live. Die!" With a single high-horizontal strike, his head came right off in a shower of blood.
End flashback
Naruto wondered why no pain had come to him and why he wasn't in hell. "Am I dead?" Kenshin's eyes became soft again "No shild, you aren't dead. Where are your parents?" His face became a mixture between hurt and anger. "They locked me out of the house...and I've been out here for three years. This happens at least once or twice a week..." Kenshin's eyes became hard, harder than normal and now he was put for blood. I'm going to pretend I didn't hear that. "Tell me child. Would you like to be trained in the art of killing? The power to be unbeatable, do be invincible?" Even though Naruto was six, he knew what was being asked of him. "I do." Naruto said that with determination and a little bit of hatred. Kenshin was thinking a little bit different. Yes! Now if he can use that hatred as fuel, then he will become more powerful than me in a short time. Heheh. "Come, we have much work to do." "Yes sensei!"
Kenshin gave him his own katana. And let tbe training begin. No matter how hard he tried, Naruto could never land a single hit on his sensei. But even he knew he was improving. I've stumbled upon a prodigy.
"Attack me once more, faster this time." Naruto moved faster than he thought was possible. Nowhere near Kenshin but still hella fast. And the routine was repeated over and over again for the next 10 years. Naruto knew all the techniques, all but one. (You know what it is and I can't spell it.)
"Alright that's enough for today." Those were Naruto's favorite words. He was tired as fuck. Little did he know, tomorrow would be the hardest day of his life.
Kenshin showed him the last technique. "Ready Naruto?" He got in position. "Here I COME!" He didn't know it, but he just killed his master. His chest exploded in a shower of blood. "MASTER, NO!" "Calm yourself Naruto. This was supposed to happen. Live. Become the legend you wanted to be. And move on. I'm not gone as long as I'm not forgotten. Goodbye, Naruto..." "...MASTER, NO! NO, NO, NO, NO! WHY?!" He fell to his knees and looked up at the appears that Kami is crying. A tainted soul, yes, but did what was right. And may Kami have mercy on that man. That night, after digging Kenshin's grave,Naruto walked down the mountain, sword in hand with his golden eyes of death shining in the moonless night. Beware. For the second Battousai the Manslayer has come. And he's out for blood.
With food in his belly and sword at his side, he was ready to kill. He wandered the land punishing the guilty while challenging the best swordsman. So far all of them were pathetic. Hearing about samari in iron country, he went there hoping to fight someone worthy of him. And all he found was disappointment. Everyone died. Even Mifune. But he, now he, was a worthy opponent. He was the only one in the whole world that made him try.
In Konoha
Jiraiya of the Sanin hopped into Hizuren's office with a serious look on his face. "jiraiya, what's wrong and tell me..now!" "Iron country just dropped of the map. I went there myself and found nothing but dead bodies. If there is a swordsman strong enough to take out Mifune and his army, then we have a major issue." "WHAT!? This is bad. hopefully he doesn't go after us. As long as we don't provoke him, we should be alright." "There's more. He knew I was watching and told me to spread the word of Battousai the Manslayer. Hizuren...what I saw...made your stone incident look like a water balloon fight. So...much...blood..." At this point, Minato was scared. Very scared. "Do you know what it looks like?" "Yes I do. Here's picture." Hizuren turned paler than his hair. This was the Jinjuuriki of the Nine-Tailed Fox. If he seaks revenge, he and his ANBU will be the only ones with at least a 1 in 1,000,000 shot at beating him. And that's damn close to impossible. May Kami have mercy on them if he takes that path.
"Come out, Stone Ninja." And out came 20 stone jonins. "Surrender or die. You've killed one too many ninjas and you will die." "Try me..." His voice was calm. Too calm. This and his golden eyes scared the shit out of them. But then they remembered their cause. With a unified battle cry, they charged at him. They knew this wasn't going to be easy but they did it anyway. While they were Jonin for a reason, to Naruto, he had seen snails move faster. When they pushed, he pushed back. One-handed thrust. Dead backward slash. Dead. Battoujutsu. 6 dead. 360 tornado. 8 dead. Running battoujutsu. 5 dead. All point stab. Dead. Okay so maybe that one was a little overkill. The thought has he looked at the bloody mess in front him. His mood darkened. "No to send that worthless piece of shit, Tsuchikage." Naruto said in a very dark and angry way. Naruto started writing a note that said..
"Dear bastard Tsuchikage,
I can go all day long. If you value your men, then keep them away from me. Unless you want me to send your people back in box, by all means keep doing this.
With hate,
Battousai the manslayer
P.s Go fuck yourself
"That should do it. I wonder what it's like back in Konoha. I need some money and I need a job." And he began is 10-mile walk to his "home" village. "I hate that place."
Chapter: 2 A/N: Whole story rewritten. Same words.
Naruto was walking down a dirt road that lead toward Konoha. Not much happens in the Land of Fire. Cloud has yet to recover, Mist is in a civil war, and Stone would be wasting men if they tried anything. Other than the usual bandit B.S that goes on all over the world, not much happens. Good for them. "Whyyyyy?" Naruto was very annoyed. Clearly some bandits were up to now good. But this time, there was a squad of Stone ANBU among them. Naruto, being the bastard that he is, decided that the quiet approach was boring. So why not kill everyone in a 5-mile radius? "Kid! Get lost and we might let you live!" Naruto's smartass reply, "Sorry but it's hard to get lost in your own ass. Unless you have a big and ugly ass of that size." The bandit boss was furious. "Forget it kid. You're dead!" They stood no chance. Everyone knew about Naruto. No one knew his real name but he was known as, The Bloody Painter, Battousai the Manslayer, and The Bloody Hell. But no one had seen his face. To an extent, that's nice but it gets old after a while. So he let the captain of the ANBU squad live. So he could tell the story of how he killed over 1,000 people in under 2 hours. "Go. Tell the world what you've seen. Tell them that I am hunting the wicked. And tell them that I am death. I only strike once but I never miss." With a fearful nod, he got up and ran back to his home village.
flashback Minato
"Hello team 7. I have a C-ranked mission for you." Sasuke smirked. "Finnaly I can test my skills." Sakura, being the useless piece of trash and is better off dead than alive, shouted, "Yeah! Go Sasuke-kun!" Minato felt bad for Kiba. Considering who he was with. "Yeah. Thanks Hokage-sama." You're welcome. Now go away. I have paperwork to do..."
end flashback
Flashback team 7
Kiba was currious. Kakashi-sensei? What usually happens on these types of missions?" "Most of the time, it's just kill some bandits and nothing more. Although I'll protect you if something goes wrong. After all, I'm known as the Copy Ninja for a reason. "Oh okay. Thanks sensei." "You're welcome."
"Stop! Now!" Sasuke looked like he wanted to kill something, sakura was useless so if she died, no one would care. And Kiba knew something was very wrong if Kakashi sounded serious. "I smell blood...And a hell of a lot of too." 'this is bad. I don't know who or what happened but we need to get out of here now!' Kakashi made two clones. "Everyone, pick a clone. We're getting out of here. Kiba chose the real one. Sakura got clone one and sasuke got clone two. Now kakashi was a Jonin for a reason. And his clones were no push-overs either. They made it back to Hidden Leaf in 10 minutes. They weren't very far out but were still in a rush.
end flashback
"Kiba. Come with me. Everyone else, go home." Sakura was too tired to care and Sasuke had flashbacks of what happened when itachi killed his clan. 'We're most likely going to talk to hokage-sama.'
Minato's office
"Care to tell me what the fuck just happened?! That mission was supposed to get the genin's to kill for the first time! By the time we goth there, all you could see was blood. Whoever or whatever came through there, needs to be left alone!" Minato realized that even though he was basically questioned in a questionable way, he knew that he should let it go. He has bigger problems like how he's going to make sure this doesn't get any worse. "WHAT!? Did you see anything that would give clues about who did this?" Kiba interrupted. "Excuse me...I saw a paper on a body that said, From Battousai the Manslayer. I am hunting the souls of the wicked. I am Battousai the Manslayer. I always strike once but I never miss Fire country is full of pests. Consider this a favor for the world." "I took it with me. Here it is..."Minato paled. "I want every single person chunin and above in my office right now!"
5 minutes later.
"Everyone, I have bad news. I kept this a secret hoping this would go away. But it's only gotten worse. Yesterday, Team 7 was sent on a mission to kill some bandits. But when they got there everyone was dead. The killer left a letter for whoever would find it. Here it is." He read it out loud. From Battousai the Manslayer. I am hunting the souls of the wicked. I am Battousai the Manslayer. I always strike once but I never miss Fire country is full of pests. Consider this a favor for the world." Asuma. This bad. While's he's not wrong, this could be very bad. Our best bet is to leave him alone and do not provoke him. There are only three known people who can do that. Myself, Kushina, and itachi. But now a new player has entered the game. My final order for today. Avoid him at all costs. Hell. I refuse to send even ANBU after that guy." Everyone in the room was scared. "I fought that guy before. He let me live because he saw greatness in me. He saved my life." Kurenai. "And this matters how?" "I was out of chakra and about to die. There were 500 stone ninjas in front of me. I thought he was going to die. There were no survivors. He killed them...all of them...Remember what I have told you." This meeting is over
Kiba went home . Ninjas were supposed to be strong but he needed help right now. "Mom...sister...help me..." He passed out. "Huh? KIBA?! Mom, get over here now!" 'I hope he's okay...'
Chapter 3:
Tsume entered the room. "What the fuck happened to him?!" "I don't know. All I know is that's he scared of something. It can't be kyuubi. It hasn't been seen 10 years." Tsume is a smart woman and she was at the meeting. "That can only mean one thing..." "What do mean?"
"Honey have you heard of battousai the manslayer?" "No, I haven't, why?" "Well...he was the one who caused the bandit incedent. Made Iron Country suddenly drop off the map, left Wave defenseless, Humiliated Hidden Cloud..." Tsume continued, "If you ever see him...don't provoke him. Back away slowly and then run. Only Hokage-sama, Itachi Uchiha, and maybe Kakashi, even have a ghost of a chance against him..." 'If mom's so freaked out about this ,then I better do what she says.' "Thanks mom...for the warning." "You're welcome honey."
Hospital
Kiba regained consciousness. "What the hell...Oh right...I remember..." Kiba was depressed. More than ever.
Hizuren, Kakashi, Tsume, and Hana entered the room. "Kiba. can you please tell me what happened?" Silence. "So..much...blood...Who ever or what ever did this, needs to be left alone. Hokage-sama…I've never seen so much blood in one place. Hell, I bet the hospital has less blood than that.." Kakashi. "Hokage-sama. Permission to speck freely!?"
"Granted." "I think we might be better of blaming this on some random rouge shinobi who has that kind of a reputation Other than Itachi."
"Kakashi. That's not a half-bad idea. The only question is, what will he do if that guy finds out what we did?"
"I'm not worried about that shinobi when he finds out. I'm worried about what will happen if the Battousai finds out."
Tsume, and Hana were strangely silent. Tsume until now. "How..? How are we going to kill him..? We have no chance against this many...Do I go out and try to kill him?" Hizuren answered. "Hell no! No one is to seek him out..." From the last war and the Kyuubi attack, we haven't fully recovered yet. Naruto. Wherever you are I hope you're safe.
"Yes sir!" Was the response of everyone.
With Battousai the Manslayer
He just got finished with another bandit camp. He didn't know if his life was getting better or the amount of fucks he gives are decreasing. Didn't matter. He loved what he did. Not killing, but ridding the world of this, trash. This is what he does. BOOM
"WHYYYY?!"
ooo Cliffy.
Chapters 1, 2, and 3 complete.
R&R and R&R
Pairing: Yes or no
OC
Tenten
Ino
Hinata
OC killer (NO YOAI)
Fem. Someone?