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Yayss!! A new story from me!! Edited!! and slightly revised!! WOOT!! (used to be less than 700 words, now 1,119 words of PURE STORY!!) 

I hope u like it. -smiles shyly-

Warning: contains OC. (not mary-sue!!) If u h8 OC's LEAVE NOW.

FYI: The OC in this Chapter shall NOT have a romance with a canon character.

I do not own any Naruto characters, the show, the bishies, the sexy ninjas, or the awesomness of it all. I have never claimed and never shall claim to be Masashi Kishimoto.

Timeline: Right After Sasuke kills Itachi. The Akatsuki never goes after the jinchuuriki's. A least, not yet... So, Naruto 'n' Gaara are safe and fine for now in this fic. mmk?

.:Introduction:.

"Who are you?" asked Sasuke, coldly, of the raven-haired girl tending to his severe wounds. She was equipped with a first aid kit, and was wearing a white cotton doctor's jacket over a short black dress with no shoulders, long sleeves and tight leggings. He was lied out on a bed covered in several layers of stark white sheets. Most were blood-soaked, violent red splotches ruining the cotton.

He was bandaged all over his person, and felt quite sore. But he didn't mention that, for he was an Uchiha, and Uchiha's NEVER admitted they were hurt/in pain, and he wasn't about to be the first, the last. The only one.

"Madara-san, it seems the chibi-Uchiha is awake." She told her master, sounding respectful; while making rude gestures at Sasuke. He began to glare at her, no female had ever made rude gestures like that before at him. They usually fawned over him like he was some sort of attractive, rich king.

"Ah Sasuke... Awake at last." Spoke the pumpkin-masked Akatsuki founder. Sasuke looked away from the annoying girl, and fixed Madara with a glare.

"Who are you?" He asked, the icicles from his words visible in the air.

It was then that Sasuke Uchiha learned the truth, in grand detail. The true reason behind the massacre that claimed his family, the grand unveiling of the secrets guarded so protectively by Itachi, his brother, who didn't hate him after all... Sasuke was speechless. His plan for revenge had been against the wrong person.

"It seems he's in shock; Madara-san." the girl said. Sasuke noticed that she had been there all along...

Sasuke hid the tears he had shed.  It wouldn't do for someone, a non-Uchiha to witness his looked up at her, with complete disrespect, flippancy, and spoke to her in the same manner he spoke to his former fangirls back in Konoha. Because he assumed she would become a fangirl eventually. All girls, sadly, always did.

"Who the hell are you?" She turned to the self-proclaimed avenger, her black hair somehow reflecting light in thousands of colors, even some white. She raised a pierced eyebrow at him, while flipping him off nonchalantly. She wasn't very nice, you know?

"She is my daughter, Hoshi..." Madara spoke up, from the shadows, sounding proud and amused. He had submerged himself in the dark after he discovered that Itachi had transmitted eye techniques to Sasuke programmed to destroy him when he revealed his Sharingan. Madara had no desire to die, so he deactivated his Sharingan, and hid in the shadows, the dark. His favorite place...

"And the one who healed your mortal wounds, you ungrateful bastard." She clearly enunciated, posing in her black clothing, while crossing her arms. Now she had flung on a voluminous black, feature-less somber cloak. She had gotten rid of the white jacket. Then she turned away and left, probably off to kill some bunnies.

Sasuke ignored her, and asked Madara a personal question... "In what way, can I avenge my brother?"

"Soon. Soon, Sasuke-kun." And with that, the oldest living Uchiha disappeared from the room, leaving a bewildered and ultra-angsty Sasuke to his thoughts.

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"Come this way... ugh, why?" Hoshi muttered, as she paced. It was several weeks later, and Sasuke had been nursed to health by an angry, abusive nurse. He had endured, because he didn't want Karin raping him while he was in incapacitated.

Madara had announced that all involved meet at certain quadrants.

Sasuke had seen his henchmen, and they had followed him. Again.  Each for their own reasons.

They waited in silence for Madara to show himself.

Sasuke, Karin, Juugo,and Suigetsu had been handed Akatsuki cloaks by the reluctant Hoshi.

"Your cloak, Chibi." she had sneered at Sasuke. He had ignored her. Even though he didn't like being called 'chibi'. ((chibi means little))

"Who are you? And why are you insulting my Sasuke-kun!" yelled Karin, offended, as she shook her fist at Hoshi. Hoshi looked at her, smirking.

"Your fangirl-ness amuses me." Hoshi laughed, at Karin, making the former feel inferior. Karin got mad. She didn't like being laughed at unless it was Sasuke the one doing the laughing. Sasuke... laugh with mee!!

"I AM HIS GIRLFRIEND, BITCH!!" Screamed Karin, as she dove for Hoshi, hoping to beat her to a bloody pulp for insulting the object of her attentions and obsessions. Sasuke glanced at Suigetsu, ordering him to hold Karin back with his eyes. Suigetsu held Karin back reluctantly, while telling her what he thought of her, as Karin screamed obsenities at him.

"Hn, Karin is no girlfriend of mine," Sasuke said coldly, at no one in particular. Even though Juugo and Suigetsu were fully aware of the several times that Karin and Sasuke had... hooked up. Karin was easy, and Sasuke was bored.

"You're right. She must be a member of your harem, not your sole girlfriend." Hoshi commented, coldly, to everyone and no one at the same time.

Everyone paused. They were deep in a forest. In a small clearing, dangerously close to Konoha. What were they doing there???

Plotting. "Avenging". Healing....

"Listen to the plan." Madara ordered everyone present, as he reavealed himself from the trees.

"We are to sneak into Konoha, undetected, and kidnap the medic-nin known as Sakura, apprenticed to the Godaime Hokage." Madara looked at everyone. Sasuke's discomfort was there, everyone knew it.   "We are then to arrange an exchange: Sakura for the boy known as Sai. That is our goal at the moment."  Karin glanced at Sasuke. "Sakura is a valuable object. In truth, we will exchange a replacement Sakura for Sai, perhaps my daughter, or Karin." Karin looked alarmed. "What we need her for, is on a need to know basis. You don't need to know." He said, glancing pointedly at Sasuke.

"Madara-san, I do not know what this target looks like." Hoshi said, sounding slightly aggravated.

"Very well, then. Sasuke, draw a picture of your former team-mate. "

"Teammate? Ugh. That pink haired bitch? she'll try to take MY SASUKE-KUN!!!!" Karin screamed, and commenced beating up a poor, defenseless tree.

END OF CHAPTER 1

I hope u liked the revised version./I hope u liked the fic.

C ya next time. Bye.

Next time: Chapter 2: "Broken Bond?"

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-Kijo Asuka