This is my first story please review and tell me what you think.
Also please tell me what you think i am doing right and what i am doing wrong.
disclamer: I do not own fairy tail only the ocs
no ones pov
A strange man in a dark cloak walked in he walked up to the bar "where is the guild master for this guild?" the strange man asked "that would be me" Makarov said."How can i help you?" "I wish to join this guild i heard it is one of the most profile guild there is" the strange man said "sure and what is your name?" Makarov asked."my name is Seth" Seth said "go to Mirajane to get your mark" seth then walked over to the bar "where would you like your mark and in what color" Mira asked"my left hand and in red" Seth said. "there you go your now apart of fairy tail"
seth's POV
"can i have some water?" I asked "sure coming right up" Mira said. As i was waiting a huge brawl broke out between a pink haired guy and a black haired guy (by the way for people my character does not know will be referred to by their hair color) soon my water came and by then the whole guild had started fight."is it always like this?" I asked "most of the time yes" Mira said "also who are those ice and fire mages?" I asked "thats Natsu a fire dragon slayer an..."wait a fire dragon slayer!" "yes and the other is Grey a ice make mage" Mira said "oh i am gonna love it here" i said
"oh ya by the way you never did say what magic you use?" Mira asked "I will not tell you only one person in this guild knows" "who?" Mira asked "Erza Scarlet" "you know Erza" "yes" I said. Right after I said that Erza burst through the doors sneezing "I'm back what did I miss?" Erza asked "we have a new member and he says he knows you" Mire said "ya long time no see Erza" I said maybe she forgot about a our last encounter " are you Seth" "oh good you do remember me" I said " I thought you were in another guild what happened" Erza asked as we were talkin the guild was silent "it was destroyed a few days ago" I said like it was obvious "does that mean I can tell them your guild and magic" Erza asked a little excited "sure but I will not remove my old guilds mark!" "What's his magic and old guild" everyone yelled "his magic is berserker requip and his old guild was the berserker guild" Erza said "dos that me he's a crazy requip mage?"natsu asked "
NO natsu you pink hair weirdo it means that i can go into a slashing frenzy" i yelled "can you show us" someone said "but i will only fight Erza she is the is probable the only one here who can keep up with me"i said and the crowd went silent " Erza what do you say wanna fight tomorrow" "sure but are we going all out?" "no i will no use the mode" i it was settled the mod started to dissolve but natsu started to walk towards me "hey seth have you ever beaten Ezra in a fight?" "ya once but that was a long time ago also" I said "Do you have a place to stay?" "ya i got a three story building before i joined" "three storys! how can you afford that?!" "well i did a class berserker missions with is like a regular s class mission so i get paid a lot" "wait your a s class mage but also a A class mage how does that work?"natsu asked "no i am a berserker A class mage but thats really just a regular S class mage"i said "oh" "wanna come on one with me some time" i asked "hell ya" natsu replied.
wish the others were here they would love it here maybe Erza know where they are if only
the next day
Seth's POV
i was awoken by a big explosion 'am i under attack? is the town under attack' I ran down to the first floor with 2 axes in my hand but it was really just Natsu and a blue cat? why is there blue cat and why is it flying."Natsu what are you doing here, why did you blow up my door, and what is with the blue cat?" "YOU JUST NOTICED ME! I WAS WITH NATSU WHEN YOU MET HIM!" the blue cat yelled "sorry i din't see you so whats your name?" "Happy"happy said "sorry about the door i tried knocking i tried going through the window but you wouldn't answer" Natsu said while rubbing the back of his head.
man he is really annoying how does Erza put up with this the only good thing i can see about him is that he would make a great berserker too bad i can't teach him. "Natsu what do you want?" "sorry i just wanted to see if you wanted to see if you wanted spar before the fight?" Natsu asked "no Natsu i do not want to spar what would just wast my energy i want to be at full strength when I fight Erza and since your here would you like to come in for some breakfast i have some fire i could shoot at you" i said "sure and thanks" Natsu said "hey what about me?" happy asked "i think i have some fish i could give you" i said.
I shot fire at Natsu with one of my fame swords and roasted a fish for happy and had some fish my self. Man those two can eat fast i should have a a fight with Natsu sometime see how a fire dragon slayer fights "thanks for the meal now lets get to the guild hall!" Natsu said with a weird grin on his face as we were running a guy ran straight into me but then was gone we finally got to the guild hall to see a angry Erza i hope no one destroyed her cake. she then got in to full battle armor and we went out side.
so this is the first chapter tell me what you think. oh ya by the way my oc is 6 foot white has black hair and is very buff. please review and give me all your criticisms, ideas, what you like, and i will be accepting oc's for Seths friends.i will try to make every chapter this long and updating will take a few days when in school and maybe 1 or 2 days during hollidays