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From third rate magus to genius shinobi.
PROLOGE
Death is a natural aspect of life, all things, be a minuscule insect or a towering existence such as an Aristoteles find their end at some point in time or other. Now normally after such event an imprint of the living being is stored in one of the unlimited archives of Akasha, the sum of all than has been, is and has yet to come; unfortunately not all existences are made the same; in some cases like say a human existence with a perception of the world so remover form all others and so willing to see it by his own rules than is capable of creating his own reality witting himself and forceful manifest it upon Gaia in complicity with an implanted Avalon: the ever distant utopia and the implanted arm of an ageless counter guardian interfering in the natural process of extirpating all traces of self-awareness stored in the soul before sending said metaphysical manifestation of life in its merry way to the next preprogramed dimension become a nearly impossible task and; in cases as this one; fragmented remains of the being known as Shirou Emiya are conserved in the soul.
Being death is horrible to anyone who can remember the experience, as Shirou can testify. First is the excruciating pain of all the sealed conscience of Counter Guardian EMIYA being suppressed; fortunately that give enough time, from Avalon, to commence to counteract the invading force actually salvaging the precious magic circuits of the archer, unfortunately even the ever distant utopia has not the strength to stand to Akasha cleansing force.
Then the explosive last stand of Avalon helps to reduce the next offensive of Akasha, and left behind minute traces of its holy and curative energy.
So now Unlimited Blade Works fall under bombardment, shattering to pieces like delicate glass, only some of the more cherished treasures will remain intact, a pair of black and white peerless swords, a demonic drill-sword, a nail and chain combo, a disturbing chunk of stone craved like an enormous sword, a red lance drunk in the blood of its victims, a blunt ceremonial dagger, a large katana, a black great arch, a deceiving normal shinai, six black blades … and the more powerful holy sword; all resting in a little hill.
So this is the soul than take residence in the embryo of Senju Atarashiki , a chunin loosely blood related to the once prestigious Senju clan of Konoha, permitted to carry the name in honor of said clan.
In one of the innumerable medical texts written by Tsunade of the sannin, the kunoichi refers than in the fourth month of pregnancy, just when the fetus commence to develops its nerve system, the chakra pathway system is expect to appear to. So in a village of ninjas, when absolutely everything related to chakra is closely monitored, and in a young woman fetus is detected by a standard chakra coil count diagnostic jutsu, that said unborn infant carry whiting himself an extraordinary 415 coils of big size even to a child five years older and being the normal number of said coils 361 the information is quickly send personally to the Hokage and the mother informed to present herself to the village leader ASAP.
The process of entering the embryo is painless but estrange, you are conscious and processing everything, but your new brain is not developed enough to function and what you feel are; at the same time; familiar and alien, not having any motor control in your own body is terrifying. Rapidly all hi functions cease to exist for preserve proposes instinct and habit take charge while your conscience is pretty much in solitary confinement until your brain can handle it.
"You sure of this?" ask the old Sarutobi, rereading the results for the five time.
"Positive sir" the medic said "I repeat the diagnostic jutsu five times before consulting Hyuga-san here"
A nod from the pale eyed shinobi is received before he speaks. "Never have I seen, not know of an individual whit so much tanketsu, not even Namikaze-sama the old holder of the tanketsu record with 369 compares"
"But my child is fine right? I mean the tanketsu count is not prejudicial?" Inquire the distressed mother.
The third focus his attention to the medic in interest for the answer and very pertinent given the circumstances.
"Nothing to worry about, at least for the moment, there is not apparent malformation in the embryo and the chakra being produced is consistent with the number and quality of the system; if anything the fetus is in better physical state than its pars" report the doctor while making a list of future appointments from the chunin.
Thinking careful on the matter at hand the professor takes his decision "As of this moment the information discussed here, and anything related to this situation in the future, will be made an S-rank secret privy to only the presents and AMBU Uma and Usagi who new assignment is to protect and monitor mother and child until new notice, additionally a copy of the results will be send to Tsunade in her position of Senju clan head by Kuma who after delivering said message and return to the village will join Uma and Usagi in their duties. Dismissed"
Once left alone in the privacy of his office Sarutobi permits himself a content smile, to think than even himself has beginning to believe than in the Senju clan has all said and done, and now from nothing great promise return to the old tree. "A joyous day from all Konohagakure has come at last"
Inside the womb of his new mother the fetus previously known as Emiya Shirou commence to feel and explore all his little new residence, incapable of thought, but driven by force of habit integrated be his old self, the unborn child reach for something in himself not knowing what it is, or the motive of the search but not the least determined to fund it.
Normaly the idea of an infant of less than five years old reaching his chakra by himself is laughable; there are been cases here and there spreader by generations or countries of distance in very chakra sensitive individuals like Senju Tobirama or Ao of Kirigakure; but a fetus in his five month of gestation has simple not contemplated; not the least this one do. With unprecedented abandon and tenacity of steel… at least for all 2.5 seconds his juvenile attention span permitted him before falling sleep to the rhythmic heartbeat of his mother. This very same thing will happen for the next three months with various grades of success.
"You are telling me than a yet to be born of 8 months is molding chakra?" The disbelief in the voice of the blonde woman was nearly palpable.
After months of receiving outstanding and insane reports, the kunoichi has decided to take care of the case in person. Ordering Atarashiki to be relocated to a little clinic in a village situated on the coast, than serve as a hidden mednin training and research facility to AMBU.
"I myself cannot believe it in the beginning Tsunade-sama" Replies the mother caressing her bely loving. "At first I was capable of feel my little baby so clear for one or two seconds then five, then fifteen, it is a beautiful sensation, now we can maintain contact for a little over three minutes"
Pensive the older woman reach for the exposed abdomen of the pregnant one and commence to apply various diagnostic jutsus intended to reach the fetus. "Remarkable, the boy is awake and indeed molding his ch…" A sudden unexpected sensation, the fetus chakra latches to hers and is… "His chakra is trying to emulate mine" the excitation and awe in her voice was clear.
For her part the mother smile only became wider and more radiant.
"Little Kishiro is a very avid learner to, I has been working on water nature manipulation; intending to extract the moisture of a leaf; when I sense Kishiro slowly attuning his chakra to mine; we have been working on it for the last month and a half" Proudly state the chunin .
Now in full medic mode Tsunade found herself thinking and probing for any type of malformation, bacteria, virus, disorder, and triple checking everything organ for organ, tissue for tissue.
"I cannot found anything wrong with the body of the patient, is interesting to note than while he is not in accelerated develops pregnancy his health is indeed superior to any other fetus at this stage" After some minutes in silence the test finish and the medic return her attention to the mother "any other singularity you have note?"
"well I have noted than giving maintenance to my kunai seems to calm Kishiro, and seeing the kenjutsu spars and training appear to excite him quite a bit, cooking appear to put him in a good mode and in this days I cannot ignore a person in need of assistance, is nearly compulsive for me to at least offer help"
"Really?" Cue swept drop from the medic "Thad is not exactly normal cravings but there is nothing bad about it either, for now just try to not overexert yourself on any of those activities" Resolve the sannin.
Shirou or Kishiro as his new mother has named him has in love. After months of patient wait the brain of his new body matures enough to let he be aware for some minutes, and what he see was mind bowling, deprived of od is body proceed to discover a new, and exiting, source of energy an in quantities outside of his understating. The best part his mother know and utilize this… chakra; hell she can even alter the properties in hers to form basic forms of water manipulation; and even bearer, she discovered than he can emulate her. And decide to train him in it!
Just imagining the possibilities made him feel all giddy. And this new chakra presence than now some other person is utilizing in him; some form of specialized structural analysis as far as he can discern, so much energy! Easy on a servant's level.
So now the big question is: What more I can do whit this?
Glosary:
Aristoteles – Clasification given to the ultimate of a spicies like Type Moon, ORT, Gaia, etc.
Akasha – As said in the chapter all Knowledge
Atarashiki – The new mother of Shirou I derive her name from (Atarashi) New and (Ki) Tree, wood.
Kishirou – The new name of Shirou pretty much White tree
Justu – Technique or skill.
Shinobi – Male ninja
Sannin – Title given to Tsunade, Orochimaru and Jiraiya (Three legendary ninja)
Tanketsu- Chakra point or coil
Sama – Sufix of respect given to a person of more social standing than oneself.
Chunin- Intermediate level a ninja can attain
Well that's all from now. I only want to clarify some things
- English is not my mother language. I am Mexican and self-taught in English so yea this fic actually cover mi writing needs and exercise my grasp in your language
- Please I beg for a beta. As you can tell my amateurism is more than showing but I like to learn and well a beta will be of tremendous help.
- I like both Fate and Naruto but prefer the AU fics than not sow only canon so yea expect that.
Ok some of you give me much to think about and after fixing the mistakes (at least those pointed to my). I came to want to rewrite much of it but I will not. In place of it I will expand and take more time to revise and publish chapter two.
I think that is all please review and note that I will not erase any flames but I not gone take then in count either, critiques is welcome. Thanks for your attention.