Shane Gray stared at the wall. His face was pale, and tears always showing at his eyes. His girlfriend, Mitchie Torres, was sent to the hospital because her car was hit by a truck. The truck driver's was drunk when he was driving the truck.
Everybody leaved. But Shane still in the hospital, not leaving Mitchie. Everybody told him to leave and visit her next day. But Shane refused.
"Mitchie's both legs are broken, and she can't walk, she might using the wheelchair. Oh, I forgot, she's in a coma." The Doctor's word echoed in Shane's head. "Both legs are broken and she's in a coma." Is this real? Mitchie is in a coma? She can't walk? What?
Shane got up from the waiting chair and walked to Mitchie's room. There, Mitchie was lying on the bed. The room was all white, even the wall. This made all memories of he and Mitchie started to play in his head and, a tear fall down to his cheeks.
He walked closer to the bed and sit at the chair next to Mitchie's bed. He looked carefully at her. Her whole body and her lips are pale, there's wires everywhere connected at her body and her eyes are closed. She's still breathing, but it looks like she was dead. What if Mitchie really dead by now?; Shane thought. He brushed it away.
The tears keep falling down to Shane's cheeks. It made him really hard. Really.
"Just hold on a little bit longer and you'll be fine, Mitch." He squeezed her arm.
Author's Note: Ok! That's it! My first one-shot :P It messes, A LOT. And it's the worst one-shot ever in the history of one-shots. SO ANYWAY. This story was dedicated to my BFFL, Haribel (not real name). Her auntie was driving her niece and suddenly (I think) a car hit her auntie's car and her auntie's left leg is broken and her niece's condition was the worst: both legs are broken and she's in a coma. Her niece's 5-year old brother was traumatized by the accident. So yeah. The last line, "Just hold on a little bit longer and you'll be fine, Mitch." , I actually said that to her: "Just hold on a little bit longer and she'll be fine." :P Inspired by the JB song.
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