Hello, peoples! i am the unlucky duckling, and this is my first fanfic. i am writing another one and the other one was supposed to be my first fanfic, but i came across this random idea while i was washing the dishes with my sister. please don't flame, I myself know this is crappy, so if you dont want to read it, just exit the page, and calmly walk away. thank you.
Disclaimer-thingy: i dont know what this is about but everyone else is doing it, so i guess i'll so it too, just to be on the safe side. i dont own maximum or fang.
Me and fang were supposed to be cleaning the kitchen
but we were making out instead.
'geez I really hope that no one walks in on us, but then again, with my luck, they probably will' I thought. fang, being the master at multitasking, was freaking putting away the dishes while still kissing me!
he sucked a soft spot on my neck and I moaned. loudly. fang quickly brought his lips up to silence the moan, effectively shutting me up.
*time jump!*
He shoved it in, but it only went in to about halfway in.
'Max,' he complained, 'why won't it go in any further?' he started to pull it out, but then shoved it back in again, repeating the process again and again.
'Fang,' she explained,' you're trying to put the knife in the wrong slot'
'Oh' he said dejectedly. as he pulled out the knife, and slid it into the correct slot
Ok, soo, tell me what you think... i've changed my mind about the flames, you can put them in too if you want
But i go by the saying 'sticks and stones will break my bones, but words will never hurt me'
(please keep in mind that this is my first fanfic)(i think that i sort of mentally scarred myself writing that. i can read em, but i definately cannot write em)