This is my first fanfiction, and I'm really bad at titles so sorry if the title is bad. And of course, the story might not be so great. Read and review thanks, and of course write what you think I should do for some chapters. I can always get better at writing! And I know cats can't really laugh or smile (or smirk), but I'm writing it like that because it just makes sense for those parts, sorry.

Chapter One

Stormkit's POV

"I'll get you!" Stormkit shrieked when her brother, Oakkit, ran into her.

"You will not." Oakkit mewed, lunging at his sister. They had been playing all day, and couldn't wait for their apprentice ceremony in a few sunrises.

It's so unfair; he is so much bigger than me! Stormkit thought, looking at her brother's muscular build. Why am I so small though? We're from the same litter! She kept thinking about why she was small, and he was so big. When we become apprentices, he'll look like a warrior and I'll still look like a kit! Stormkit's thoughts were interrupted when her brother spoke.

"Are you ok?" He asked, "You look like you're in another world."

"Yeah, I'm fine. I'm just thinking." Oakkit looked at her, still trying to figure out if everything was ok.

"Hey, want to play moss ball, Stormkit?" Stormkit jumped and turned around to see Hollykit.

"Hollykit, you scared me!"

"Scaredy-cat!" Oakkit thumped his tail on the ground and laughed.

"Its not funny!" Stormkit wailed.

"Yes, it is, Stormkit. You would be scared if a leaf fell from a tree." Oakkit snorted and stalked into the nursery. It's not fair; he thinks he's so much better than everyone else!

Stormkit slumped down, defeated. And I can't do anything about it, because he thinks it's an embarrassment to even talk to me!

Jaypaw's POV

Jaypaw sat with Whitepaw at the fresh-kill pile and yawned.

"Tired?" Whitepaw asked Jaypaw. "I know we just had our assessments, but it wasn't that tiring."

"I couldn't sleep last night, I guess I was sort of excited." He answered, looking at Whitepaw. She's so beautiful. Maybe we'll be mates? We have been friends since we were kits. Whoa! Why are you even thinking about she-cats right now? You're not even a warrior! He thought.

"What's wrong with you?" Whitepaw meowed.

Jaypaw looked at her, confused, then he realized his pelt was bristling. "Nothing, I'm fine."

"And talking about our assessment, how did you do? Are you going to be a warrior?" Whitepaw mewed to Jaypaw.

"I would really rather not talk about it." Jaypaw responded, looking slightly embarrassed.

" Ha! You didn't pass!" she exclaimed.

"Yeah… about passing…"

"Featherpaw! Jaypaw didn't pass his assessment!" Whitepaw yowled to Featherpaw.

"You don't have to tell the whole clan." Complained Jaypaw.

"To late, your still in the apprentices den for another moon, and me and Featherpaw get to be warriors!"

Jaypaw sighed and went to the apprentice's den. This is going to be a long moon.

I know its really short, but the next chapter will be longer. And I forgot to do the allegiances so here you go! (And don't forget to review!)

LEADER: Sunstar- Golden tabby tom with amber eyes.

DEPUTY: Leafshine- Tan she-cat with bright silvery-blue eyes.

MEDICINE CAT: Lilypool- light gray she-cat with emerald green eyes.

Apprentice, Starpaw.

WARRIORS:

Lionclaw- Golden tom with dark blue eyes.

Apprentice, Jaypaw.

Mistystripe- Silvery-gray she-cat with icy blue eyes.

Littlefoot- white tom with small gray paws.

Sootpelt- black tom with gray stripes.

Dawnheart- brown she-cat with golden eyes.

Iceclaw- white she cat with one black paw and green eyes.

Lilystream- light gray she-cat with light blue eyes.

Embersong- jet-black tom with yellow eyes.

Shiningbreeze- white and silver she-cat with amber eyes.

Thorntail- brown tabby tom with amber eyes.

Cherrypelt- pale red she-cat with dark blue eyes.

Willowtail- tan she-cat with white patches.

APPRENTICES:

Featherpaw- dark gray she-cat with green eyes.

Whitepaw- White she-cat with icy blue eyes.

Jaypaw- dark gray tom with lighter gray stripes across his back and dark blue eyes.

QUEENS:

Whiskertail- blue she-cat with a thin and long tail and long whiskers. Mother to Littlefoot's kits. (Hollykit- black she-kit with gray flecks and green eyes, and Molekit, tan she-kit with white paws.)

Graypelt- Gray she-cat with blue eyes, mother to Sootpelts kits. (Oakkit- brown tom with green eyes, Toadkit- dark brown tom with tan spots, and Stormkit- tan she-kit with a white spot around her eye, a white ear, and bright blue eyes.

ELDERS:

Cedarpelt- brown tom with pale blue eyes.

Treetail- tan she-cat with a long dark brown tail.

Sorry I know its really short, but please review i really want to make it better, and thanks! :)