This fan fic is mainly about ray so yay for Ray fans pplleeasssssseeee
review!!!!!!
I am a good author I really am and stop saying ssuuuuuuurrrrre cos I know u are!
Chapter 1
Ray stood there staring into the murky, now red with blood pond, unawhere of his shocked dirty face. There shinning out of the murkiness was Maria's face clear as ever. But Ray knew it couldn't be her I mean he had just seen her die himself. Her blood was everywhere to prove it mixed with other people's blood!!!!! The worst thing is that he knew everyone who is now dead. The thoughts of Maria's death drifted back into his mind. He had watched her fall to the ground and lay motionless not breathing. He shook the memories out of his head but when he looked back at the pond Maria's face had gone. He suddenly felt something big and warm clamp over his shoulder. Ray looked up to find it was Lee (from the White Tigers) hand Lee put on this really big smile even though Ray knew he had been practising for quite a long while. Lee's puffy watery eyes gave it away that he had been crying. Ray managed a painful half smile back, he opened his mouth to say something to Lee but shut it again as he found that the words seemed to stick to the back of his throught. Ray still didn't know what was going on was this real? Did all all these people really die?
Find out in the next chapter.....
This was sooo annoying the spell checker went whenever I spelt Maria's name
PLEASE REVIEW!!!!!
I am a good author I really am and stop saying ssuuuuuuurrrrre cos I know u are!
Chapter 1
Ray stood there staring into the murky, now red with blood pond, unawhere of his shocked dirty face. There shinning out of the murkiness was Maria's face clear as ever. But Ray knew it couldn't be her I mean he had just seen her die himself. Her blood was everywhere to prove it mixed with other people's blood!!!!! The worst thing is that he knew everyone who is now dead. The thoughts of Maria's death drifted back into his mind. He had watched her fall to the ground and lay motionless not breathing. He shook the memories out of his head but when he looked back at the pond Maria's face had gone. He suddenly felt something big and warm clamp over his shoulder. Ray looked up to find it was Lee (from the White Tigers) hand Lee put on this really big smile even though Ray knew he had been practising for quite a long while. Lee's puffy watery eyes gave it away that he had been crying. Ray managed a painful half smile back, he opened his mouth to say something to Lee but shut it again as he found that the words seemed to stick to the back of his throught. Ray still didn't know what was going on was this real? Did all all these people really die?
Find out in the next chapter.....
This was sooo annoying the spell checker went whenever I spelt Maria's name
PLEASE REVIEW!!!!!