HELLO ALL! This is the unofficial preview of Legends of Oz: Zac's return. I have chosen to use Zac's concept. You guys may request to be characters, but you have to PM me and you won't get credit. Incase you don't know, this is a sequel to my friend Zac's fanfiction. I want you guys to give me reviews on what you think of this, and I will rewrite it accordingly. I will give you a preview of the new first chapter next week, and this story will take off in mid-October.
"Its Friday Friday gotta put of a chapter for Friday oh by the way I think for the legends of oz zack's return you should bring zack's little sister along since she's a huge fan of the wizard of oz and I think the next villain should be earl zack's brother since his other brother played the wicked witch of the west"
Well, I have to ask Zac's permission first, but I'll consider it.
"Oh by the way for the next fan fiction can we get new cloths since in the legends of oz the gang got new cloths
Cloths idea for me
Cute short yellow country girl dress with blue Jean jacket and blue stockings with brown boots and brown gloves and my hair grown longer(and curly-er) and it down to my hips and its in a messy braid with cute little blue and yellow flowers in it or and can my hat be change in to a red hairband
Please and thank you and see you Tuesday by" "Niki: hey I heard what a.c said and I would like a new set of clothing to for the next fanfic
Lilly: same here
Nikis dress:
Scarlet evening gown with a silver and red top and red ruffles that go down to the floor her hair is all wavy and has a silver flower crown and for shoes um black high heels
Lillys dress:
Indian (like Pocahontas) dress with a animal tooth necklace with brown sandals and a spear and a golden leaf crown hey she's the queen of the jungle she can have a spear and a crown if she likes oh also in dead make up like two red marks under neath both of her eyeys
Oh and can't wait for the next chapter by"
Okay. I'll do that.
Okay for this preview, I am switching the first two scenes. I am also making this a year since the events of the Wizard of Oz. If you don't like that, I'll change it. Here we go.
Zac woke up on a Saturday morning and started working. It's been a year since the big tornado, and the whole state's been working to repair the once beautiful area. All that ended up in vain, because this rude "government official" said that Zac's house should be condemned and they should move. Zac tried to fight him, but it was useless. Zac ended up singing a heart wrenching ballad about the end of the world. Just as he finished his ballad, he saw a rainbow head toward him. He ran. He ran and ran and ran, but there was no point, as the rainbow snatched him up.
Previously, in the Emerald city alicia, now dressed in a Yellow country dress with a blue jean jacket, blue stockings, brown boots and gloves, and a red hairband, with longer hair in a messy braid, ran throughout the Emerald castle. She said to Nikki and Lilly, "Oh, thank you guys ever so much for coming. Emerald city needs all the heart and courage it can get." Lilly, now wearing an Indian dress with, a bear tooth necklace, brown sandals, and a leaf crown similar to her flower crown, replied, "Oh, it was nothing." Nikki, now wearing a scarlet evening gown with a silver and red top and red ruffles that go down to the floor, said, "I just hope nothing to severe happens without Zac here." "Well, actually he's coming." Replied alicia. "How" The other to asked. "I'm going to bring him here while you guys guard Eyan's broomstick." Just as she said that, they walked in to find the broomstick gone. Immediately alicia ran to get Zac.
Now, I already know I need to makes some changes, but what do you guys think?