Hey guys! I know, I know, "Another time travel plot!?!?" Well... sorry? Anyway, yes, I know, I used a time travel plot in another one of my books, but, this is actually different, that book was them getting brought to the future, this one is to the past, also, both have different story ideas, that story was ash, as a baby, being time traveled away from a horrific was, him growing up, and journeying, this one, yes it is sort of a journey book, but, hey, he's getting betrayed. That's different. You guys may be thinking," betrayal!? Ugh! This will be so clique!" True,some parts may be "clique" but, most of the other betrayal stories are basically, oh no, ash gets betrayed, oh no his Pokémon hate him for a stupid reason, oh look, he is living on a mountain, hey look, he has all legendary, hey look a new championship, hey look ash is in it, oh no, new name (a lot of people use the name "satoshi", satoshi is ash's name in Japanese") hey look, ash vs. betrayer, hey look betrayer gets ash pissed off, hey look, ash blows the world up with arceus. The most annoying thing in my opinion (not to really offend whoever does this) is the ash X "OC", OC is quoted is because this "OC" is always the same character, a girl who mostly wears pink and her name is "Pakura", the annoying part of this is, everyone uses the name pakura, no creative new names, another annoying part is the way the characters act, most of the time, during this tournament the way ash gets pissed is by one of the male betrayers threatening to do something to pakura, I am not saying what it is do to me being too lazy to changing the rating on the book. The male character who usually says this is Max, MAX, THE TINY CHILD!! Another person who acts out of character, is our main character, I get it, he was betrayed, and that broke him, I get it, he grew up, but it gets kind of annoying seeing the same thing writen over and over. So, I am making an attempt at something more... " unique", yes, ash IS getting betrayed, but he isn't going to do anything illegal, or climbing a mountain. I will write the first chapter later today, so hold back your "troll" comment, I will write it later today/ tomorrow if I am unable.

Written Sunday- December something, 4:24 pm