Hiya if this is your first time reading this story then really you can ignore this but for those people who reviewed my story and liked it ya'll gave me quite a couple of things to work on so i reedited my story and made it less mary sueish... i hope(i have no clue who mary sue is) and tried my best not to make it repetitive while keeping the story on track so really not much of this chapter has changed but i want you feedback on my changes. Please and thank you.
--Chapter one(Revised)
"Titans trouble!" Robin stated. The teen super heroes came to life as each of them dropped what they were doing except Beast Boy who was trying to finish his game.
"Who is it this time?" Raven asked snatching the game controller from the shape shifter who surrendered unwillingly.
"I don't know but whoever it is picked the wrong city," Robin said, "So l-" The intruder alarm went off causing the Titans to halt.
"Dude do we ever get a break?" Beast Boy yelled but everyone ignored him as they waited for Robin's instructions.
"Raven and Beast Boy come with me to the city. Cyborg and Starfire secure the tower," Robin commanded and they all nodded, "Titans, go!" They all sprang into action. Robin, Raven, and Beast Boy headed for the city and Starfire and Cyborg began their search with the basement.
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When the second alarm went off I knew I messed up big time. It wasn't supposed to happen like this at all, it should have gone like I planned. I crouched behind some crates, deciding to beat myself up later for this plan gone wrong, and listened. First I heard footsteps followed by two voices. I smacked myself mentally as I thought how incredibly stupid I was. I can't even break in to a stupid poorly protected tower correctly.
"Are you picking up any threats yet, friend?" Starfire asked. Cyborg took a quick glance around the area cautiously.
"No not y… wait I think I got something," he announced successfully. I held my breath. What would happen when they found me? They were going to find me anyways so I just took a deep breath and showed myself. The robotic man looked at me along with the red head chick that started to glow green when she saw me. I bet she thought she looked intimidating. She didn't. I slowly put my hands up but not out of fear though. I could take her if I wanted to and the big robot guy too.
"I come in peace," I stated trying to stay calm but in actuality I was a panicking mess. The two Titans glanced at each other questioningly and I knew that we were all thinking about what was going to happen next.
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"Who are you? And what business do you have with our Robin?" the weird red head girl demanded. I rolled my eyes. Am I the only who found her annoying?
"That's none of your business. So why don't you butt out?"
"We can't do that," said a very calm Cyborg, "Once Robin gets here we're all going to know why you're here. So you might as well spill now." I sat back on the couch and crossed my arms over my chest. He was right but I wasn't talking till I saw Robin. I needed to see him more than anything.
"I guess we're doing it the hard way then. That's too bad," Cyborg said simply. The tower door open and entered the rest of the Titans.
Robyn saw the back of the girl's head. She had long hair the color of his own that fell in soft curls.
"Cyborg did you find out who she was?" he asked in whispers. I smiled I could hear him loud and clear. The sound of his voice made me want to jump into his arms and have the reunion I've been waiting for my entire life.
"No she's still being stubborn." Robin nodded and made his way around the couch with Beast Boy and Raven in toll. She was familiar to him her blue green eyes bored into his. He couldn't remember though and that only made him think harder. I smiled wider and nodded urging him to remember me as he became frustrated.
"Dude who's the hottie?" Beast Boy finally asked. Dark energy cackled around the gloomy girl dressed in dark blue as she glared at the back of the green boys head.
"That's my sister," Robin finally remembered and I nodded enthusiastically.
"What?!" the Titans yelled shocked. I finally stood up and fixed my clothes for dramatic effect.
"Hello Robin nice to see you again," I said walking up to him.
"Scarlet?"