Hi this is my Second Fan fiction please let me know what you think and please comment on any think you think I need to improve about my writing thanks.

Chapter 1

It's the day of Whitney and Billie's wedding Tiffany, Lauren and Zsa Zsa are all upstairs. Getting changed Lucy could see them through the window having fun she was jealous that Whitney was marrying Billie.

Lucy: That should be me up their getting dressed and had a little girl called Lily not stupid Whitney Dean.

Then she remembered at the Stag night she managed to get Billie's phone and call his old mate and told them about the wedding and she also told Connor to shot Whitney.

Lucy: Soon that will be me with little Lily and getting married to Billie Jackson.

Connor: Oh! Do you know someone called Lucy?

Lucy: So you must be Connor.

Connor: Yep so what times the wedding?

Lucy: 10:30am and the reception being held at the Vic.

Connor: Ok I got it. Said walking away

Lucy: Where are you going?

Connor: To visit Billie Boy.

Connor walk over to Billie's he sore Billie leave his and made his way to the park. Billie wanted to escape for a few minutes away from the nagging of his mum.

Connor: Hey Billie Boy.

Billie: Hey Connor what are you doing here.

Connor: Well can't I come and see my mate once in a while.

Billie: The last time I sore u was when u kidnaped Whitney.

Connor: Any way what are you dressed up for?

Billie: Because I am getting married.

Connor: To who?

Billie: Whitney!

Connor: Why are you getting married to that cow for?

Billie: Because I love her any way what's I got to do with u and don't you dare try and stop it!

With that Billie stood up and walked away. Connor just stood there and then made his way over to Whitney's he found the back gate open so, he went through and climbed though the kitchen window, and hid there until Whitney was on her own then he would capture her and then shot her. Connor could hear Bianca call out saying she was going over to Carols and that she would see them at the wedding.

Ryan: Whitney the cars here.

Whitney: k thanks I be down in a minute.

Ryan, Tiffany, Lauren and Zsa Zsa all went and got in the car. Whitney walked down the stairs being careful not to trip over her train and took one look at herself in the mirror and went to open the door when…

Connor: Oh sank where are you off to?

Whitney: Connor what are you doing here?

Connor: A little birdie told me you were getting married today.

Whitney: Yeah so that means he chosen me over you

Connor: yeh but u have not known Billie as long as I have and he would never go for a sank like you.

Whitney: Well guess what he has chosen me over you and I am not a sank.

Connor: Well that means I have to put a stop to it!

Whitney: What do you mean by that?

Then Connor got a gun out of his pocket and shot Whitney twice in the stomach than ran off while Whitney collapsed on the floor.

Will Whitney survive please review and let me know what you think and I will update tomorrow promise thanks RoseVera1