First fanfic review please
First fanfic review please
Don't own anything so calm down
Summary: Naruto Rokudaime Hokage is sent back in time to D-Day were he joins the fight with America to help end the war but then is sent back to the future to when he was a genin NARUTO IS A SNIPER and is kind of based on the sniper private Jackson from "Saving Private Ryan"
Naruto: sniper
Signing up
Life was good for 18 year old, youngest Hokage ever, Uzumaki Naruto he had killed off both Orochimaru and all of the Akatsuki members. And not only that but he had brought back Sasuke if only battered, bruised and missing an arm, before finally marrying the one person that loved him more than anything, Hyuuga, err, Uzumaki Hinata. They had been married for a whole year to the day. But life can always change
Life WAS good until he just happened to wake up, dazed and confused, in a completely different world and out front of a building that had vibrant banners with blue stars and red and white stripes by the large double doors that had a large line in front of it all young men around his age.
So Naruto being Naruto just walked past the line and directly into the large building and walked quickly up to the man in a green uniform behind the desk (recruiter)
"Hello me boy" said the recruiter holding out his hand to Naruto which he hesitantly shook. "Now you're here to enlist are you not good, good we need all the young lads we can get to help with the war effort now what's your name uh…"
"Naruto, Uzumaki Naruto" replied Naruto
"Ok then Naruto you got one strange name there but the army doesn't care much about names now does it, ok then yer' (the next) bus is going to be here in 5 minutes so if you have to say goodbye to anyone I would get it over with 'cause you aren't going to see them for a long time.." he said gruffly, and handing Naruto a stack of papers until he saw the questioning look on Naruto's face "what?"
"What exactly did I sign up for uh… sir?" questioned Naruto
"What?"
"…" was naruto's reply
"your serious," the man sighed, "you just signed yer self up for the U.S. Army kid you'll almost certainly be sent to the front lines in Europe I been there before and it isn't pretty," said the recruiter pulling his leg up onto the table only there was only leg until mid shin everything else was gone strait down and replaced by a metal post attached to a shoe. "Alright listen to me kid I know that your not from here maybe not from this country but I don't want to see you head to your death"
Reaching into his desk he pulled out a book and two larger pieces of folded paper one was definitely a map and one was apparently a blank piece of paper until the man unfolded it, "ok, this book will explain everything that's gone on up until this date it's a copy of the presidents public journal and a list of all the major battles that have gone on so far this is a two sided map of the world on one side," he said flipping if over so Naruto could clearly see the name America printed across the top and then flipping it over so Naruto could see the much less detailed side of the map which he assumed was the world, "this paper, will get you into a more intense training, in all my time served on the front I have only seen that look on a few of the most violent and brilliant officers in the entire army, not the ones who pussy foot around behind the lines but the ones who actually do something to see that it gets done.
Honk Honk
"ok that's the bus you need to get on it and when it stops you will be lined up a friend of mine will call you forward you just keep close to him and he'll make sure your kept safe until you understand what you need too keep you alive well get going kid I don't want anyone to think I'm favoring you or something so git'
"Thank you uh…?"He said not really knowing what to call him
"Call me Jackson"
"Thank you Jackson sir" said Naruto quickly bowing to the crippled man and then running out the door and onto the bus not really knowing or caring that what a bus was and was quickly gone
Jackson just sighed then a huge smirk graced his face 'that kid is going to be a great soldier' he thought 'provided he can survive boot camp before calling the next kid up to his desk
With Naruto
Naruto was amazed how was this huge metal monster of a machine moving them (say that 5 times fast) across the desert towards somewhere completely unknown to him but I guess him being from a very distant future (like the world ended and then restarted distant) now normally he wouldn't have asked Jackson or even allowed himself to be talked down to but with his child hood and the way he had to grow up from there he had grown the inept ability to sense who he had to talk to as a superior or who he could talk to as lower or equal to himself, hence why he had talked to Jackson as his superior that and that guy had one serious air about him which gave the idea that he had been there and done that.
Anyway
It was a surprisingly short time before the 'bus' stopped and the people around him started to get off so he started only to be told by the driver to stay so he did by himself as the bus drove off farther and farther sometime during the trip Naruto dozed off only to awaken in a bunk with a letter tapped to his forehead, which read:
Dear Private Uzumaki,
Welcome to the United States Marine Core or USMC you are to begin training
Immediately upon awakening report to the mess hall for your briefing and then
Your schedule you may or may not know but you are to begin a new training regimen usually withheld from new recruits but one of the high ranking officers believes you ready
-Commander(s) Stone
'Commander stone huh' thought Naruto before getting up and noticing the clothes on the end of the bed
2 pair of gray green pants
2 pair of gray socks
1 pair of black boots
2 gray T-shirts
2 brown button up long sleeve shirt with the letters USMC printed neatly in black
Naruto got dressed in the clothes eyed the clothing angrily nothing was vibrant and noticeable he liked to be seen and the fact that even when he wore bright clothing people couldn't see him made him feel cool so looking around he saw an American flag though he didn't know it yet and clipped it to his bunk 'maybe I can do something with it later he thought happily at the idea' before rolling up the sleeves on his button down shirt and walking out of the bunk house before realizing that he had no idea were he was going so taking a deep breath smelled out the entire area before finding and following the smell of food all the way to a large building witch he assumed was the mess hall and there sitting at the main table were two people both completely alike in every way accept there hair styles one had a clean military cut and the other had shoulder length hair tied back in a tight pony tail
"Welcome you must me Uzumaki Naruto" said the man to the right with his hair cut into a military cut and a go-t (not sure if it's spelt that way) which were both gray and dressed in a set of green fatigues
"yes that would be me" confirmed Naruto
"well I am Commander Stone and this is my brother Commander Stone together we are going to whip you, and anyone else we see fit, into the finest soldiers that this nation has ever seen are you in or are you out?"
Naruto stood strait like he used to when he was in ANBU and with a flourish saluted both men and nodded quickly and surely
"excellent now you will address us as sir OR commander Stone anything else and I will have to punish you can you do that"
Naruto nodded again
"good" they said together before walking forward toward the doors Naruto turned to face them as they both kicked on side of the double swinging doors off its hinges, "Private Uzumaki, welcome to the first day of the rest of your life" they said before walking out the door
so like it hate it review please I like this idea and would like to keep writing it
-later