Love before the Fight (the thoughts are in italic, I'm working on Future Hope at the same time! Read and Review J)
Chapter 1: Unexpected meeting
Young Prince Vegeta ran down the long dark corridor. He had just finished some late night training and was determined to get back to his room before Frieza could catch him.
'Man, that Frieza' thought Vegeta 'one day I'll be free of him for good.'
He continued running, when all of a sudden there was a presence in the atmosphere. Someone was ahead of him and coming his way. He ducked into a corner and waited for them to pass. He stood there; trying to quieten his breathing and doing his best not to make a sound. What was really 5 minutes, seemed like double the amount to the 6 year old prince. The shifts in the atmosphere made him feel tense and extremely nervous.
'If this is a danger to me, I might just have to stop them' Vegeta thought. In his training session today he had learnt how to fire energy out of his hands, just in case any danger seemed to come his way. The footsteps came closer and closer; Vegeta's breathing seemed to increase rapidly.
'AGH! I can't take this anymore!'
He leapt out of the corner, his arm outstretched and a small amount of purple energy was seen in his hand. Suddenly he felt the energy fade and his fright became less and less as he saw who was in front of him.
A young girl, her arm outstretched and a green energy that was there started to fade too. She was wearing the basic Saiyan armour; her tail swaying to and fro in fright, she had short black hair and pure blue eyes that seemed to pierce through Vegeta. The two young Saiyans dropped their arms and looked at one another. There was an awkward silence. Then the girl stood up straight, put her clenched hand over her chest and bowed at the Prince.
"Hail Vegeta!" she said, her voice was so calm...
Vegeta nodded at her and she stood up again. She seemed to be quivering, "Forgive me sire, I was just going back to collect something…I didn't mean to be out this late!"
Vegeta walked slowly over to her, he didn't mean to frighten her and wanted to apologise. The Saiyan girl took a few steps back in fright, her voice starting to quiver now whereas a few moments ago she was as calm as anything…
"D…don't hurt me…" she whispered, her eyes brimming with tears.
Vegeta placed a hand on her shoulder, "Don't worry. Go get your things…I need to get going myself."
The girls face brightened up. She bowed once more and ran off in a hurry. Vegeta just stood there.
For a moment he wondered what just happened, who was that Saiyan girl.
"I didn't even get her name" he said to himself. He turned once more and ran off back to his room.
Once he arrived he sat down on the side of his bed and curled up on it. His tail swung to and fro as he thought of that girl. He leant his head on one of his arms.
'Come on Vegeta, you're a prince aren't you? Princes aren't meant to interact with lower class Saiyan… scum…'
Scum. It hurt to say the word, especially when he was talking about her. Vegeta lay awake for ages… what was this feeling? He couldn't stop thinking about the girl… he tossed and turned all the time, thinking 'Stop it Vegeta! You're a prince… A PRINCE!'
These thoughts went on for ages until finally the young prince sighed heavily and fell asleep.
What do you think? This is a bit difference from Future Hope. Hopefully in those chapters the writing will be as detailed as this. But what do you think of this? Should I continue it? Read and Review please ;)