I am so sorry for not doing anything! I would come up with an excuse, but I have to say I have just been lazy! Anyway, This is my first dark clan challenge! Yay! This took not as long as I thought it would so enjoy!


This is about two kits named Emberkit and Shadekit. They are normal kits in Riverclan, but they are more mischievous than most kits

"Come on lets go put some ants in the medicine cat den!" Said Emberkit to his brother, "Willowshine will be so mad!"

"I'll go find some fire ants!" said Shadekit, "That will make it even better!"

So they found some ants on a stick and put them in the medicine cats den. Later that day Willowshines apprentice, Larkpaw, found the ants and knew it was the kits. Luckily, the ants did to eat the herbs that were in the den, but unluckily they bit Larkpaw.

"Maybe the Elders wouldn't mind telling those kits a story about bad kits", thought Larkpaw, "It might stop all the trouble"


"But we don't want to go to the smelly Elders den!", cried Shadekit, "We want to stay here!"

"Yes I know, but I have to clean out your nest and you don't want to have to help me do you? You will if you stay here, so go along.", said their mother, Duskfur, "They might tell you a story"

"Fine we'll go" Groaned Emberkit, "but next time we get to play outside."

So they went to the Elders den and the Elders already knew what story to tell them, at Larkpaw's request.

"Why hello kits." said Rushtail, "Would you like to hear a story?"

Now, obviously scene however bad a kit is, they always respect Elders, the kits said yes to Rushtail.

"Well this is the story." Said Rushtail, "Once there was a kit named Stormkit he was a kit that caused a lot of trouble. He liked to explore the camp, but one day he got very bored, so he convinced his brother, Oakkit, to go outside the camp with him. The went to a river and tried to cross some stepping stones. Stormkit slipped and had to be pulled out of the water by a warrior."

At this point the kits gasped because they already enjoyed this story and Stormkit.

"The next thing he knew, he was in the medicine cats den and he stayed there for many days. When finally went out, all the cats of his clan stared at him. He did not know what was wrong until he looked in a puddle. His jaw was crooked." Rushtail said dramatically, "To make things worse, his mother renamed him Crookedkit. After that moment Crookedkit became a good kit and eventually became leader."

"Wow, Crookedkit is awesome! I want to be like him!" Said Shadekit

"Me too!" Said Emberkit, "I'm going to be the best kit ever like him!"

And after that, they became good kits and helped around whenever they could


Might be a little weird, but it might be good. Maybe. I just finished reading Crookedstars Promise (Again) and I had so inspiration for this story!

Star going down! Bye!