The edited edition.
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto, however the plot IS mine.
Well this story is certainly ... odd.
It may make no sense whatsoever and to make things worse ... is written in the present tense.
If you spot any mistakes please tell me and I will get rid of them. Same thing goes for if something doesn't make sense.
It just had to be done. I knew what was expected of me, what it was I had to do. The lies I would later speak were already prepared in my head. I refused to let anyone down. I was later going to my fiancés house and I knew what it was I had to do...
Smile.
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My name is Hyuga Hinata. I am twenty two years old and I am the heir to all of my father's multimillion businesses. I have dark hair that many often confuse for blue, and pale eyes that lack pupils. I am engaged to a handsome man and we are both often smiling.
I wake in the morning and get dressed. I brush my long hair and then eat my breakfast. I hear my fiancé, Naruto, arrive at my door and ask me if I am ready to go. I tell him I am and we leave for his house.
Before I leave, my father asks to speak to me in private. Naruto nods at my father and then walks to his car, leaving my father and I alone. My father looks at me before offering a sad smile which I return with my own. He asks me if I am happy, to which I calmly smile and tell him not to be silly, that of course I am happy.
He whispers goodbye to me and I walk away from him, my heart suddenly full of sorrow.
I get into Narutos expensive sports car and gently kiss the blonde on the cheek, making sure to close my eyes, lest Naruto sees my not yet fallen tears.
Naruto starts to drive while I put on the radio, listening silently to the songs that reach my ears. I shut my eyes and fall asleep.
Before long, we are at Naruto's house and we both go inside. Naruto tells me his best friend, soon to be best man, will be coming round to meet me through dinner, to which I simply nod in return.
Time passes slowly as I wonder who his best man may be.
The doorbell then rings and Naruto hurries to the door, leaving me to myself. I wait patiently and, not long after, Naruto returns, alongside him is another man.
I look at the stranger and feel my eyes widen. Before me, a tall, lean male with dark hair and skin so pale stands; his beauty amazing, to say the least. Yet it is his eyes I find myself most drawn to; two dark pools of black, as empty as my own.
I smile softly at the stranger who returns the gesture with a nod of his head.
All of a sudden, a sickly sweet smell fills my nostrils, and a slender feminine body enters the room. A pink haired girl latches herself onto the arms of the male stranger, and stares openly at me. The man glances quickly at the woman, disapprovingly, but quickly returns to his calm state. Naruto looks longingly at the beautiful woman before us, ignorant to his best friend's discomfort, before turning back to face me.
"Meet my best man, Sasuke..." Naruto tells me. "... And his gorgeous fiancé, Sakura."
I look at the two and find a strange longing in my heart. It tells me that this man, Sasuke, is similar to me.
Naruto then brings out his digital camera and asks us all to gather round. We agree and Naruto puts his camera on a timer as we all get into position.
The camera flashes and Naruto smiles, then we all sit down to the dinner Naruto had earlier prepared.
We are seated Naruto next to Sakura, next to Sasuke, next to me.
During the dinner, Naruto and Sakura do all of the major talking while Sasuke and I sit mainly in silence. We share occasional glances at one another and I find my heart beating wildly inside my chest.
Sasuke and I later both reach out towards the bowl of potatoes, only to have our hands collide.
Our eyes suddenly connect and we share a secret moment, to which Naruto soon ruins by loudly breaking wind.
Sasuke and I each go back to silently eating our food whilst Sakura scolds a laughing Naruto for his appalling table manners.
I sit in silence and wish that dinner will soon end, the beating of my heart still ringing in my ears.
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