Boy with the Brunette Hair
Yumi sat alone in her apartment staring at her phone.
'Why hasn't he texted me back yet?'
Just then, the doorbell to the apartment sounded. She immediately answered the door.
"William?" Yumi asked very excited
"Uhhh, no." Aelita said
"Oh, hey, Aelita."
"Well you don't sound excited."
"I know, it's just I expected someone else."
"William?"
"Yeah."
"You're still with him?"
"What do mean still?"
"Nothing, I mean."
"Aelita, use your words."
"Didn't he cheat on you?" Aelita then thought about it. "Twice?"
"Yeah, but he said he was sorry."
Then Aelita didn't say anything.
"Aelita?"
"Yumi? As your best friend, I think you should break up with him."
"Why do you say that?"
"Yumi? I just don't want to see you get hurt."
Just then Aelita's phone rang.
"Hello? Hey Jerbear. He's here?. Awesome, we'll be right over. K, bye."
"Who's here?"
"One of Jeremy's and Odd's friend from Germany."
"Oh cool."
"Why don't you come and meet him?"
"Why would I want to?"
"So you can forget all about William."
"Maybe I don't want to forget about him."
"Yumi, just come and meet him. If you don't like him after a few minutes, you can leave."
"You promise?"
"I promise. But I have to see you put in an effort."
"Ok fine."
"Yaay."
Aelita then hugged her best friend.
'OK but it's just for a few minutes."
"That's all you'll need."
"Ok can't breathe, can't breathe!"
"Aelita released her friend.
"Hey look, you'll thank me one day."
"I seriously doubt it."
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