Hi this is my first fanfic so please compliments and constructive critism only now let's get on with this ….
My name is Kim I'm an ordindinary girl that lives an ordinary life on a reservation in la push at least it was ordinary before he noticed me. Let me start at the beginning…
"Hey Kim" said my best friend Ally
"Hi ALS" she was wearing the jacket I gave her for her birth day last month.
"So are you coming to my house tonight or am I coming to yours" asked als
You see me and ally have a sleep over every second Friday and we usually chose who's on the day
Yours, and I'll bring coa coa"I replied reminding myself I needed to run to the store after school
"Okay, and i'll supply the house" shouted ALS as she walked away
I then walked to my class excited to see if Jared was there ,you see Jared is my all-time crush and he's been absent for 2 weeks now ,not that it makes any difference he never notices me anyway .
"Jared Coal nice of you to finally grace us with your presence take your seat" said Mr Baker
Jared came and sat next to me and pulled out his books and we all started to work I couldn't help but notice he had grown, A LOT he was now a foot taller than me.
Being the cluts I am I dropped my pen and before I could get it Jared leaned down and picked it up. He looked up and our eyes met he stare at me as I took my pen back. Then he watched me like a hawk for the rest of the lesson. As we were leaving the class he turned to me and said "hey what's your name?"
"Kim" I said hesitantly
"Oh" he said "nice to meet you I'm Jared "
"I know, we have been in the same classes since kindergarten" I replied
He honestly looked surprised as if he had never realised I existed, then I realised he hadn't!
What did you think?
5 reviews = update on Thursday
10 reviews= update tomorrow
Plz review I really want to hear what you think if you have an account I will reply to you so feel free to ask questions