So this story is a one shot, but if people like it very much I could continue somehow, it's based in a Spanish song called ~Iluso by Ricardo Arjona~ I liked it so much I wanted to do my twisted version of it with hinata and kakashi as the only characters in it.


It was a gray Thursday, it rained. He sat at the bar in a cheap hotel drinking carelessly "change the song for me will you?" he said to the bartender.

There came a woman out of renting her skin a while, just another day of work. Her acrobatics of the fake pleasuring and rental of an orgasm with noise made her seem like a veteran at still such a young age.

"Who has something for the nose?" she asks at the bar.

"Maybe this napkin could help" He disguised his hook with naivety.

She looked at him with a disgusted face "something so I don't fall asleep idiot, if you give me some you can ask my clothes".

"Where can I find some snow for the insomnia now" she asked around.

"At the corner, I could buy some for both, would you like?" he answered.

She just nodded in response as they walked to the corner and went across the street after.

"I'm alone like you stranger I invite you to watch the sunrise tomorrow, I don't want you for the messing up of my bed". He said to her

'It's not what you do with your mouth what I request doll; you can live your clothes on my broken doll, I don't need it; it's not wetting my heat and drowning it in your waist what I'm looking for; it's a little bit of tenderness to see if it cures what I'm going thru'.

"Ok, go" she said without smiling.

"Does sex without pleasure turns you on?" he asked as they walked.

"Only if the client is a woman, you know what I mean?" she answered looking forward.

Hiding his expression he said "of course, don't think I find it weird, each person with their taste and passion".

"Can I hold your hand?" he asked as they were entering the little condo he had, it was just one floor with a kitchen and a living room that was shared with his bed and door that could only assume it was the bathroom.

"Give me twenty to start and we'll see" she answered looking around.

He looked in his pants and nothing, then looked under the bed and there they were, he gave them to hers like he was a buying a pair of wings.

"Wait" she said while looking at his desk.

"If that's your ex, we have no deal" she pointed at the picture of a woman with short pink hair.

"You know her?" he asked confused.

"She left you for me you fool…"


Well that was it, in case you don't know what the hell was going on, sorry hahah but I wanted to keep that metaphor type of speaking, in other words hinata's a hooker and Sakura just Left kakashi for her and he was trying to just spend time with hinata to try to forget sakura but when hinata saw sakura's picture she declined and told him.

The "I don't want you for the messing up of my bed" doesn't sound exactly the way I wanted it but if you guys understand it then its fine by me.

Snow= cocaine. (Don't you even joke about doing that)

So review if you like it or dislike it, I don't mind, just an itch I had to scratch xD.

……….Mrpv55………