Full Summary: When Peter sees Alice struggling to understand Wonderland's laws and their way of thinking, the rabbit thinks she just needs a friend who shares her own way of thinking. So Peter decides it would be smart to abduct a girl from her world, one who sees things Alice's way, in attempt to make her happy. However, what happens when this girl appears dangerous and unwilling to be friends? Did Peter make a grave mistake or is there more than meets the eye with this girl? Alice/Julius OC/Boris
This is my first ever HNKNA story. I do my best to keep the characters in character but I sometimes may go a little OOC. I've read all manga available in English and read some game walkthroughs. This won't be a crack just because I labelled it as Humor. It will also have Adventure, slight drama and Hurt/Comfort. Please give it a chance and review, favorite and follow.
Two men stood in what looked like an deserted wasteland which was made out of dozens of different colors. Well, technically, only one of the men was standing; the other was floating a few feet in the air. That man was Nightmare, a dream demon and the ruler of the space he and his guest were in now. An eye patch covered his right eye, his left shown to be nearly as silver as his hair; which went down to his chin. His outfit consisted of a zipped up grey vest, a sleeveless black shirt underneath and sleeve things connected by straps; leaving the first few inches of his arm uncovered. In his hand was a thin pipe, which he smoked as he looked down to his guest below him.
The man below him was non-other than Peter White, the Prime Minster of Heart Castle and White Rabbit. As the name suggested, the man had white rabbit ears sticking out the top of his head; which was covered with equally pure white hair. His eyes, however, were red and peering up at Nightmare through his thin glasses. He was wearing a red checkered jacket with many pockets, a pocket watch sticking out of one of them. A light pink shirt could be seen underneath it and a red tie rested over that. His pants were a dark brown color and white gloves elegantly fit over his hands.
"I do not think this is a good idea, White Rabbit." Nightmare informed as he stared down at rabbit eared with his one, uncovered, silver eye. The rabbit responded with a glare; his cold, wine colored eyes piercing daggers worse than the bullets from his gun.
"I understand the danger of the request, but I do not give a crap. After all, this is purely for Alice; nothing more." The man replied coldly. Despite the coldness from the man below him the incubus found a grin taking over his face and he chuckled softly in response.
Ah yes, the outsider Alice Liddell; whom everyone had grown to love. Thankfully, much to everyone's relief, the girl had decided to stay in Wonderland rather than return home. Unfortunately, a few people knew that a part of Alice still wished she could return home to her sister. Nightmare knew this from witnessing the dreams she'd have of her older sister. It was sad that Alice couldn't remember the truth about Lorina but it was also for the best.
Peter White, the White Rabbit, was the most pleased about Alice's decision to stay. Despite his constant jealousy and hatred of other men being around Alice he wanted her to be happy no matter what; even if she wasn't with him. If she was happy than he was happy; which is what he had told himself, and even some others, many times before. Unfortunately, Alice wasn't really happy and Peter, along with a few others, had taken noticed to this.
Even though Alice had claimed that she was getting used to Wonderland there was still many things that boggled her mind and bothered her. The reckless killing was one of the worst things that bothered her. Sadly, too many people were convinced it wouldn't make a difference because of replacements to change. Thankfully though, Alice had been able to convince Boris to be less reckless after telling him that, even if he could be reborn, he would not be himself anymore. Other things such as roles or the treatment of the faceless, and even simple things that made no common sense, bothered her.
"Alice needs a friend who can relate to her. Her way of thinking is different and confusing to us but it's the same way for our way of thinking to her. If she can have a friend that shares the same option as her I'm sure Alice will be happy again. Of course it would have to be a female; I wouldn't tolerate any men around my dear Alice." Peter continued and pushed his glasses further up his face as he did so. Nightmare looked at the rabbit man thoughtfully, considering the statement before grinning.
"Yes, you are right. Even her dreams have become affected because of this. Although, bringing in another outside can be dangerous... but perhaps very interesting at the same time." He smiled before clapping his hands together. Suddenly, a bright light appeared only a few feet away from Peter; waiting for him to enter the other world.
"You have twenty-four hours to find a friend for Alice. I suggest you be careful in who you pick, White Rabbit. Hehe, After all, this so called friend might end up being a bigger threat than anyone of us here; if that is even possible." Nightmare ended with an amused laugh. Peter nodded towards the warning and finally cracked a friendly enough smile.
"Haha, just you wait! Because of me Alice will be happy once again. Perhaps she'll finally proclaim the love she's been hiding from me." He declared dreamily before he ran towards the white light. As he watched him go Nightmare finally coughed up the blood that had beeen wanting to come out.
"Ugh, sometimes I wonder if that man is sicker than I am." He mumbled to himself; wiping the blood from his mouth with his sleeve before disappearing from sight. With the portal between the two worlds now open the incubus wished he could see the reactions from both Alice and the girl that would no doubt be kidnapped by Peter. Even if he couldn't he knew that things were likely to get ten times more interesting.
What do you think? please at least read up to chapter 2-3 before you judge this story. Please review or send me a fav/follow
by the way the description of the dream realm is partly from the first manga i read, which looked almost desert like
Edit/warning: I've already done this once before but I've been reading through my story and found more things that need improving. Unlike last time I won't be adding to the story but fixing paragraphs and rewording some things. I don't like how rushed or detailed some things are either so I'm thinking of doing that. I haven't done much yet but started on chapter 4, as that is what caught my attention the most. So please forgive any weirdness in spelling or otherwise; I do plan on fixing that