Tsukiko: Well, this is the rewritten version of my first story so, please, do tell me what you think and be honest.
Itachi: Just start the story!
Tsukiko: Itachi the disclaimer first if you please.
Itachi: Fine, Tsukiko does not own Naruto and if she did then we would all hate it.
Tsukiko: On with the story and warning, this might include violence and mild language...
"speaking"
thoughts
container talking to the beast
"tailed beasts talking"
tailed beasts thinking
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Chapter 1
A girl perched on a small, metal chair in a small, cube classroom. Shadows danced a dance of horror as tears fell one by one like small, delicate raindrops down her face. The 'teenage' girl rubbed the black and blue imprints of fingers that were left on her arm by her 'friends. Yea right more like my bullies! I hate this place! She thought bitterly to herself. She only stayed in this wretched place to hide and learn to protect herself from her worst nightmare and her most hated person…..Orochimaru. She would leave if she could. More tears made their way down her face and fell to the hard tiled floor with soft taps.
The door that led to her safe haven that hid her from her personal demons slammed open with a resounding bang. The door was pushed open so roughly that its hinges rattled. She shrank into the shadows, hoping that they would hide her, but she knew that it was all just wishful thinking on her part. Three females strutted into the room with confidence, as if they owned the place. Their heads were held high and their lips drew back in an ugly sneer. She whimpered softly and her hands grasped the chair until her knuckles turned white. Her azure eyes widened and they became wild, searching for an exit.
"Don't bother, we had a… friend make sure that you couldn't escape our wrath this time," a blond declared as she took long strides closer to the poor, frightened girl, her little group following her with malicious grins.
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Her breath came out in quick, harsh gasps as she watched the girls draw near. The leader crackled cruelly and kicked the girl in the stomach with her 4" heels. She fell to the ground hacking and choking on the air that had been forcefully pushed from her lungs. She was on her knees, clutching her stomach with only one hand to support herself. The pain raced its way through her body and it spread like a wildfire. Her hair created an inky curtain to concealed her face, and thus successfully blocking her vision. In her vulnerability, she did not see the fist that went flying towards her. It knocked her on her back, her hair spread out behind her like a halo. She glanced at the group of females and in return, she received a teeth clattering slap.
"Don't look at us scum," the group said in perfect unison.
The slap left its mark in the form of a red hand imprint on her cheek as it began to appear. One of the girls, the redhead, pulled out a knife and slowly, as if savoring the feeling, pressed into her skin, leaving small, shallow cuts on her porcelain skin. The vivid crimson blood contrasted greatly with her pale skin that had almost never seen the sun. She knew that they were far from done, and she braced herself for the torture that was sure to come.
A few hours later the females exited the room with a satisfied smirk, leaving her a bruised, bloody mess. She let out soft moans of pain as she glared up at the ceiling of the room. Every fiber of her being felt like it was being set ablaze. She stood up, wincing as the cuts stung as she did so, and closed her eyes. A concentrated look washed over her face. Her face scrunched up and a deep frown marred her youthful face. A soft green glow spread over her body and her injuries, one by one, began to heal. As soon as the process was over and done with, she stalked out of the room with a determined look on her face. It is time to leave this place! She thought spitefully to herself.
She walked out of the room and into the crowded lounge that was the gathering place most of the students of Sera High School for Assassins. All the girls were standing in their own little gossiping circles. Her most recent bullies were bragging to their friend about their latest beating, with her being the victim. She glared in disgust at their general area. She took confident strides toward the gossiping group of females. They were so busy chatting that they did not notice her until she slapped the blonde that was the leader of her current bullies. The blonde yelped in surprise before staring at her with a face that was corrupted with hate and anger. The only redhead of the club raised her perfect, manicured hand to strike her down, only to be stopped by an icy stare.
"You are a true monster and the world would be a better place without you," she intoned coldly, a harsh smirk in place.
She turned on her heel and made a beeline to the front door of the school. They were never supposed to leave Sera, and if they did, they would be hunted down and killed like animals. A teacher stepped out in front of her, his arms were folded and an eyebrow was raised as if challenging and mocking her decision. She mumbled in frustration under her breath and took a step closer menacingly. Why couldn't everyone just leave me alone and get out of my way? She sighed and quickly connected with the bond and mind-link that she had with her tenant and first friend Saya, the twelve tailed phoenix.
Saya, am I allowed to resort to violence to solve this?
"Yes, hatchling, but be careful."
I will! Stop worrying!
She cut off the connection before the phoenix could reply and let out an exasperated sigh. She turned to face the teacher and looked at him in an expectant way, urging him to elaborate.
"Where do you think you are going Miss Yui?" he answered her provocation head on, acting quite dumb.
"I'm leaving this hellhole, now get out of my way or suffer the consequences," The now named Yui returned readily and emotionlessly.
The poor teacher did not heed her warning and soon found himself lying on the tiled floor, limbs twist in impossible angles, and without a head. She huffed in annoyance as she stared down at her ruined white sundress that was now speckled with the teacher's red blood.
"Now look at what you did! You did, you ruined my dress!" Yui whined much like a child would.
At this point, everyone was gaping, and thinking You just killed a teacher and could possibly be killed, and you're worried about your dress! She sent them a sinister glare before declaring that anyone that followed her would be sent back in pieces, and with that, she was racing out the door. She rushed into the Forest of Chaos and disappeared into the shadows of the trees before anyone could even start to process what she had just said and did. As soon as she felt that it was safe, she quickly formed the hand signs that would break the illusion that hid her true age: Tiger and Ram. With a poof of smoke, her eight-year-old self was revealed to the world. Yui darted a quick glance around as she heard multiple pairs of feet pitter-pattering against the sticky, muddy forest floor. She was not in the mood to cause mass slaughter at the moment and so she did the smartest option that came to mind and ran. After a couple of miles the sound of feet stopped echoing in her ear, she checked behind her and due to her inattention of what was in front of her, she ran into something solid and was knocked to the ground.
Yui glared up at the man who she had run into and snapped, "Watch where you're going bastard."
They both stared at her in shock before bursting out in laughter, which caused her to scowl.
"What's a midget like you going to do about it?" they shot back, still snickering.
She hopped to her feet and sent them a fiery glare before putting her hands on her hips and kicking one of them where the sun does not shine. Her frown turned into a sickly sweet smile, a smile so sweet that it put honey to shame before she stuck her tongue out at them. As she waited for the one she kicked to recover, she observed the duo.
The one she had kicked had unnatural silver hair and he had red eyes that were the color of freshly spilled blood. He wore quite revealing clothes, showing off his six-pack and his skin tone was quite light, but not as pale as her own skin. He seemed to be spewing curses left and right, he was hopping around like mad clutching his most sacred place. It must have been quite hard to do so with the giant the tri-blade scythe that was strapped to his back.
His partner was the exact opposite to how the other was acting. He had what appeared to be stitches that covered his feet and hands and, she presumed, his whole body. His face was blank and it seemed as if he had no emotions what so ever. He wore a white mask that hid most of his face. The only thing that was visible on his face were his green irises with no pupils and red sclera. He also wore a white hood that hid the rest of his head. He was also tanned and muscular, but three things that she noticed was that they both wore was a black cloak that was decorated with red clouds, nail polish, and a ring.
Oh shit! Yui thought in panic.
To Be Continued...
Tsukiko: A cliffhanger!
Itachi: Shut up already!
Tsukiko: Well I'm done. What do you think? Oh and here's Yui's info. One other thing before I forget sorry for any mistakes I might have made with the grammar, and tell me if you find any.
Name: Akamine Yui
Age: 8
Rank: S-class
Chakra Nature: you will find out as you read the story
Kekkei Genkai: Dorobogan (I made it up.)
Tailed Beast: The Ten-Tailed Phoenix (Her name is Saya)
Weapon: her sword Kage Tenshi and her flute named Akuma
Codename: Black Robin or Devil's Angel
Looks: long black hair that falls in loose waves that fall to her mid thigh, azure eyes, pale skin, a flower pin in her hair for her poisons, and she usually wears a white sundress and black flats
Background: At age 2, Yui watched as her parents were murdered. Orochimaru found her and used her as an experiment. When she was 3, she began to talk to Saya. Yui managed to escape from Orochimaru at age 4. She spent two years training in a different location and she fell in love with a boy she had met a valley of flowers, and she was heartbroken when he disappeared. After that, Yui enrolled in a school for assassins called Sera. While she was at this school, she made herself look 16 with a genjutsu. At age 6, Yui was at Jounin level, and at age 8, kage level. Yui was also put in the Bingo Book as an S-class missing-nin. She is a master at torture, traps, and many other things.
Dorobogan: the ability to steal other Kekkei Genkai, and its major weakness are that every time she uses it to steal someone's Kekkei Genkai she gets life-threateningly ill. If she uses it too much at the same time she will die.
Notes: Yui has almost stolen all Kekkei Genkai in existence.
Itachi: Review or I'll send you to Tsukuyomi!