Whispers and Echoes

by A Broken Sun

At first, he was a dream come true, the most courageous and strong tom in all of the clans. How couldn't she love him? But soon, that dream turned into a nightmare, a nightmare in which there was no happiness. Her only hope was her sister, the kin who was her shadow, her heart, her echo. She was the only one who could save her life. My first story! Shoutout to Whisperblaze!

1. Chapter 1

Chapter one- The Beginning

Ok guys, so this is the first chapter of Whispers and Echoes! It's really short because I was super busy today, and couldn't do much! Shout out to my friend Whisperblaze! She's the reason I'm writing my first fanfic! Wish me good luck! Also, I will try to update every 2-3 days depending on my schedule!

Birdfeather lay in the nursery, three bundles of fur tucked at her belly. Her mate, Ravenwing padded in and smiled, happily. "You did wonderful, my dear," he mewed. "What shall we name them?" Birdfeather asked.

Ravenwing gazed at the four kits and proposed, "Nightkit for the black tom with a silver muzzle." He brushed his jet-black tail over the kit's back. The kit squirmed, and nuzzled deeper into his mother's fur.

Birdfeather brushed her tail over a silver shecat. "Echokit," she mewed. The little kit wiggled at we new named.

A little white bundle lay in the middle, black stripes down her back, and black paws. Ravenwing and Birdfeather mewed in unison, "Whisperkit." The shekit attempted to stand up, but fell back down, on wobbly legs. The two parents nodded, approvingly. Whisperkit would be one of the the greats.

Ok! That was short! If I get any reviews within the next two-three days, the next chapter will be a lot longer! Bye! Broken, out.