Okay, I plan to totally reviseify Gojin's Story, and make it better. Same story, better plot.
Gojin walked through the park as rain poured from the sky. Lightning struck in the distance, which didn't lighten the mood. He sat on a bench, thinking of past events. It had all started when he got mugged some day's before. He had blacked out, and when he came back around, he found the muggers battered and crushed before him.
This came as a shock, so he took his wallet and ran. Then whenever something angered him, he either ended up in the hospital with a straight jacket, or on the top of some building. After all that, he had to find some place to hide out, and he was now on the run from the authorities.
He soon got up and walked toward a tree. He clenched his teeth and yelled a quick "Goddammit!" and punched a nearby tree. That's when things started getting weird. The tree lifted off of its roots and flew towards a house, and Gojin just stood there, eyes wide. When he heard the sirens, he snapped out of his trance and ran back to his safe house.
When he got inside he picked up his fathers journal. Although he had never known his parents, this journal was especially important to him. He had read a lot of weird things in here, things about strange creatures with tails, and the immense strength that they possessed. He read it for a while. He heard a couple sirens pass, but got a little worried when he heard them next to the building. It wasn't tell he heard the building glass shatter that he ran to his bag (which held everything he owned) and ran out the secret entrance.
He stuck his father's book in his bag and kept on running. He realized he was running faster than humanly possible, but he liked that because mixed with the strange strength increase, his body was too. He had read about a certain creature named Goku, and he wanted to find him because maybe he would be able to describe these powers, since his father spoke very highly of his strength and speed.
Soon he heard a siren nearby, and when it sped on the path he was on, he increased his pace. He was outrunning a car! This speed made him realize just how fast he was. He looked back, triumphant. He didn't feel very triumphant when he ran smack dab into a wooden door and got knocked back about ten feet. Guess his endurance needs some work, huh? Just before he passed out, he saw a strange boy, a teenager with giant black spiky hair.
Well, that's my first chapter, Revised! Hope you like the new story, and hope you'll like it for a time to come!
