A/N: So, after the path that Tennogen gamer took, and the disappointment it became to a lot of people, even I realized just how bad it was getting. I have decided to take it down and re-start the entire thing. Elements will be removed, and new ones added.

What stays- the main character is a faunus, the Rinnegan, and the Thu'um. The new Akatsuki thing stays too, so that poll will still be open. Just without the Warframe characters.

Different- no transference or Warframe stuff from the start. No stamina mechanics. Starting closer to when canon does. Power gained much slower than before (except for the stats, which you'll see soon). More enemies, more fun breaking them.

Stats system will be based off an Oblivion-style stats mod for Skyrim. Main Quests will increase the powers provided by his dragon half. A Random Encounter system. And, training from Alduin and Acnologia instead of Rhino. A visit to Oblivion and to Skyrim, which means the addition of the Daedric Artifacts.

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Speech;

"normal"

'thoughts'

"Thu'um"

"Dragon Speaking"

"Telepathy"

'Text Box'

Chapter 1: Waking Dragon

I opened my eyes to a bright light, and immediately snapped them shut. "Urrgh…did anybody get the number of that train that hit me?" I slowly sat up. When the sting in my eyes faded, I opened them again. I saw it there, in front of me. 'Would you like to play a game. Y/N?' A game? So, did I die and magically become the gamer then? I reached out and touched the Y.

'Excellent. Please, enter your name.' I didn't take long to answer that one. "Aternis Eclipse" I said out loud. 'Your name needs a color theme to continue.'it does…damn, I was hoping that it wouldn't. Hm, let's try… "Luna Eclipse" I waited for a moment. 'Name Confirmed. Now, choose your race.'Another choice here. Hm…let's go with Faunus. 'Are you sure? Note, choosing this path will make it harder to gain the trust of humans.' I simply nodded. The system seemed to pick up on that. I felt a sudden splitting feeling from the top of my head, and my arms felt itchy.

Looking at them, their appearance had changed to a black, scaly look with reddish orange markings. Shifting my glance to a pond, I walked over and looked down. There were a pair of Dragon Horns sprouting from my head. Oh, I am so going to abuse the shit out of this. Dragons all have a chance to be brokenly overpowered.

'Now, a quick run-down of all the stats.

Health: self-explanatory, this one.

Magicka/mana; how much energy you have for casting spells. Your dragon blood gives you a permanent bonus of 250

Chakra: Different from Mana, this is how much energy you have for casting jutsu. You only have 25 now, and your dragon blood prevents chakra exhaustion. You should train to build it up.

Aura: The strength of your soul. Your aura is twice as strong due to having a Dragon-level soul.

Strength; how hard you can hit someone in battle. Your dragon blood gives you a permanent bonus of 25

Endurance; affects how hard a hit you can take. It also affects your overall carrying capacity, and your environmental conditioning. Take a permanent plus 10 with your dragon blood. Increases your Aura capacity by 20 each two levels

Intelligence: this affects how smart you are in general. You will find yourself able to learn skills faster and get more points for a level up. Due to your past life, gain a plus 15.

Personality: Like Charisma, in that it affects how much people like you. A very high personality rating may make others ignore that you are a Faunus. Due to your past life, you will start with a bonus of 20 to personality.

Speed: This one is also self-explanatory. However, it does more than just affect your ground movement. When Tree-hopping, or even flying, yes, flying, you'll find that you're able to move much faster.

Agility: Ties in with speed, making you able to perform some actions, like sneaking or lockpicking much faster. Your Dragon's Body causes a -5 to agility. Can be removed with proper training.

Willpower: How strong your magic, jutsu and shouts will be. It also normally measures your resistance to mental attacks. As you are a dragon, nothing will have a stronger will than you. Take a staggering +30 bonus. Affects how much mana you have. Chakra reserves will require training to increase.

Luck: affects the quality of look drops, as well as your critical chance, the odds of finding Lien or valuable Dust or Gems from enemies, and the general nature of a random encounter.'

Holy shit…wow. I had no idea that I would get this strong from the start. I guess, Remnant hasn't seen a Dragon in several years, but still. I'm no Grimm, and I sure as hell want to slaughter that wannabe that's sleeping tight underneath its mountain.

'Now, we'll do a quick run-down of the HUD, and of any perks brought to you by being a Faunus.

First, your health, mana and chakra will display as red, blue and cyan, respectively. You can find these bars on the bottom left of your HUD. In the center is your Compass, where quest markers will show up. For this run, you'll be trying out our new fast-travel system, which we will cover in a moment.

On the right side, you will see the charge for any enchantments, and/or a count of any arrows/bullets you have in reserve for your current weapon. Note, some weapons will have an infinite enchantment charge, and will not show up here.

On top left, if you choose to not use a Compass, you will instead see a minimap, detailing the surrounding area. And on the top right, a clock, plus whatever song you currently have playing. As a previous fan of music in your past life, you can have any song you can remember.

Your HUD can be enabled and disabled with a thought, so that you don't always have to see it.

That's helpful. I didn't waste any time and thought of my HUD disappearing. Sure enough, it did.

'for the next to last part of the tutorial, we'll do a brief talk on expansions. As you go throughout the game, you will make some odd finds. A suit of ruined power armor, a witchblade, transfer gates…etc. All of these are tied in with expansions. As a safety precaution, we have set them to only be unlockable once you reach required levels.

You will not unlock these automatically. Instead, you will have to unlock them using the points acquired from level-ups. You will have a spare tree dedicated to this, with its own points. That way, you don't accidentally use up the points for perks, which brings us to our last set of tutorial messages.'

"So, what I'm getting at, is that I'm being thrown into a game, and being made into a god among mortals as early as possible. You, whoever made this, want me to tear things up for your amusement, and my own." 'For making a smart guess, take a +1 bonus to intelligence' I f-cking nailed that guess. Well, this should be fun.

'Last tutorial before we have to go. The Skill Trees. Please say Status, followed by skills.' I did as the message told me. 'Here we are. Now, quickly, look around.' 'I don't think this is just a programmed bot telling me what to do anymore.' 'For another correct guess, take another +1 to intelligence.' Huh, I guess I was right, again.

Let's see here… a lot of these skill trees look like the ones from Skyrim. Oh, there's some new ones, Shinobi, Guardian, Huntsman…and one that looks like it might tie in with joining the Eldar…maybe. Oh, now there's an interesting perk tree. One solely related to my dragon blood. And the final perk? Black Dragon Emperor. The final perk is called Black Dragon Emperor. The requirement? Slay a pair of dragons, named Alduin and Acnologia, after learning all I can from them, then reach max level.

Oh boy, this is going to be so much fun. 'Sorry, kid. We need to cut this short. There's a town nearby about to be attacked. You don't have any weapons, so we'll start you with one. It won't be much, and you won't be able to use it again until later, but it should do for now.' The last message faded. A moment later, a notification flashed, saying that a Bolter was added, along with enough ammo to last me.

'Quest Start! The New Dragon of Remnant.

You have been dropped into a new game. After a hastily ended Tutorial, you have been asked to save a town full of civilians.

Success; 500 XP, +50 Rep with Kingdom of Vale, +25 Rep with Beacon, +10 rep with White Fang (For saving Faunus)

Failure: A town full of innocent people, adults and children, is slaughtered. Live forever in shame knowing you could've done something. -rep from all factions previously noted.'

I didn't need to be told twice. Drawing my Bolter pistol, I quickly sprinted off in the direction of the quest marker.

End

Here's hoping that this story will be much better off than Tennogen was. I'll try my damn best to not have this one be completely random…except for with the chapter featuring a certain mad god…looking at you Sheogorath.

Other than that, I'll do my best to make this an improvement over the story it is replacing. And yes, the Warframe Sentients will still be an enemy, and so will the Stalker. Also, I plan to take full advantage of my character being a Dragon faunus, something I totally ignored last time.

Don't forget to review. No flames, as they'll be fed to Natsu.