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Rivour's POV

"Is everyone ready?" My dad asked from the bottom of the stairs.

"Yeah!" I shouted grabbing my suitcases and going down the stairs.

I put my suitcases in the boot and sat down in the back of the car, my brother Aiden, who is 9, sat down next to me.

We were on our way to a vacation in Florida. We were meeting up with my mom and dad's friends. There kids will be there too. Unfortunaly.

My mom, dad, my sister Hailey and my brother Harley finally got into the car. Everyone was really tired because it was 7 a.m.

"Does everyone have everything?" my dad asked.

"Yeah," my siblings and I replied.

"I've forgot Pinkie!" Hailey screamed once we were barely out of the drive way. Hailey, who was only 3, brings her Teddy "Pinkie" everywhere.

"Hailey!" Aiden groans. "Now we have to go back and get it.""I'll go get it," Harley offers. My dad nods and Harley gets out of the car. Harley is my 14 year old brother. He always looks out for Hailey.

A few minutes later Harley returns with Pinkie and we actually left this time.

Half an hour later, we arrived at the airport. It was 10 a.m by the time we boarded the plane.

I sat down with Aiden. Hailey sat with Harley and Mom and Dad sat together.

"Are we there yet?" Aiden asks about 20 minutes later. I'm texting my boyfriend Jaden. The worst thing about going on this vacation is not being able to see him. I wanted to stay home with him but my dad wouldn't let me. My dad doesn't really like Jaden. He says that there's too big an age gap. That's not true though. He's 18 and I'm 16.


I woke up and looked around. Where was I? Oh yeah I was on a plane, I must of fallen asleep.

"Aiden!" I said. "Aiden wake up," I pushed him off me.

"What?" he mumbled. "You fell asleep on top of me," I told him.

"So?" he yawned.

"I was uncomfortable," I said.

"Then why didn't you just push me off?" he asked. I just shrugged.

"What did I say about no fighting on vacation?" my Dad asked.

Aiden and I shut up.

"Yeah, because the four of us never fight," Harley said sarcastically.

Aiden and I laughed while my dad shook his head.

The plane finally landed at 3p.m. Well it was actually 12:30 here in Florida.

We got off the plane, collected out luggage, got on the bus to our hotel where my Mom and Dad's friends were waiting for us.

"Jade, Tori," mom exclaimed running up and giving two women a huge hug. One had Black hair and looked around 7 months pregnant. The other had brown hair and tanned skin.

My dad was talking to two men, one had black skin and dreads, the other had an afro and glasses.

My siblings and I looked around.

There were five other kids standing with their parents. None of them looked older than me, none were younger than Hailey.

"Hi, I'm Liliana!" smiled a girl who looked a little younger than me. She was dressed from head to toe in pink. "I love you hair, I want to die mine blond." she said touching my bright red hair.

"Thanks! I'm Rivour! This is Harley, Aiden and Hailey," I said pointing to my brothers and sisters.

"Hi, Liliana!" Hailey beamed from next to Harley. "Hi Hailey!" Liliana said picking her up. When you thought about it, Hailey and Liliana were quiet alike. They were both total girly-girls.

"So who are your family?" I asked her.

"Noah and Ava, they're twin demons," she said pointing to two kids sitting on suitcases playing with game consoles. "And my parents are Tori and Robbie." She pointed to the guy with the afro and the woman who wasn't pregnant.

Harley and I walked over to the other two boys. One looked about Harley's age and one looked about 3 years younger.

"Hi!" I said breaking up whatever argument they were having. "I'm Rivour."

"I'm Archie," the older one said. I noticed that he was holding scissors. That's not weird….

"I'm Logan," the younger one said. At least he wasn't holding any scissors.

"I'm Harley." My brother introduced himself and the three of them started talking.

I walked over to my mom. "Can we go inside the hotel yet?" I asked her.

"This is my eldest daughter Rivour," my mom said to her friends. "We'll be going inside soon, we just need to sort out who's going sharing a room with who.

"What? We have to share rooms?" said Aiden who was now next to me.

"Is that a problem?" my mom asked him.

"Yeah. Everyone here are freaks!" he replied before storming off.

Everyone sat down on their suitcase and our parents told us who is sharing with who.

"Okay. Noah and Ava, will share, Aiden and Logan will share, Harley and Archie will share and Liliana and Rivour will share," my mom announced. It wouldn't be too bad sharing with River. But I did feel sorry for Harley, he might get stabbed in his sleep!"Hailey, you will sleep with mommy and daddy, but your room mate will also be your buddy for when we go out!" My mom said.

I heard a few groans and giggles. "Yay! Buddies!" Harley exclaimed sarcastically. Everyone laughed.

"They Hailey, you'll join in with either Liliana and Rivour or Harley and Archie.""And remember no fighting and have fun!" My mom said.

This was going to be a long vacation!


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