Toxin : The Son of Carnage

This is my first attempt to make a fanfiction on this site. I'm french, so excuse me if my english isn't very good.

I really like the character of Toxin, and I regret Marvel didn't use him more : the idea of a superhero symbiote was, I think, pretty good. So I tried to imagine my own "Toxin" serie. It begun a few time after "Toxin : The Devil you know". This is just a beginning, I will pursuit if

Warning : I do not own Toxin, neither any member of his family. They're the property of Marvel Comics.

Intro : Hunt in the night

The thief was running in the street, terrified. The thing was following him, he was sure of it. And he couldn't do anything but run...

To his horror, he stop, discovering that the street he had taken leaded to no where. Shaking, he take his gun and look around him, waiting...

- Looking for me ?

The thief scream as curving, dark, claws-like fingers touched his elbow. He jumped away from them, as the creature merge from the dark.

It was partially humanoid, with a head, two arms and two legs. But it was very much taller than ordinary human, and incredibly muscled. Its skin was of a bloody red from the abdomen up, and dark blue from the abdomen down, with sort of tendrils on several parts of his body. Its seems to have no visible hair or nose, only two white, pupils-less eyes, and vicious fangs.

Panicking, the thief shoot. With incredible speed, the creature jumped, easily avoiding the fire, and raise its hand. A web-like substance was projected from his palm, hitting the man and sticking him against the wall.

- W... what are you. And what do you want.

- You can call me Toxin. And I don't want anything from you. But the police will probably be very interested when they will find you here...

The thief look at the creature with disbelief.

- You... are one of those good guys ?

- Yeah, I know it's difficult to believe. Don't look very much like one of them, do I ? No matter. You will probably never see me again... Good bye.

The creature then jumped in the air, projecting a new "web", and diseappear in the darkness.

Five minutes later, the thief was found by three policemen. Not without some difficulty, they eventually succeed to free him from the wall, and arrest him.

- This looks like Toxin's work, stated one of them looking at the web.

- Toxin ? The creature who captured Razor-Fist few days ago ?

- Yeah... Lucky he helped, weren't us ?

The two first policemen look at the third.

- You really speaks about him as if you know him, Patrick...

Patrick Mulligan just raised his elbow.

- Well, l saw him a few time, that's all... What are you thinking ? That I actually am Toxin ?

The three of the burst in laugh.

Well, I stop here. Review, please. What do you think about this ? If I have good reviews, I will probably continue...