Everyone is going to hate me for this,but ... how about you just read it...

ERIC POV

I stride throw the dark corridors of Dauntless. People shuffle through the halls pass me with silence and averted eyes. I see Four hurrying past me and into another hallway. His eyes meet mine for a second ,but he disappears . I walk past his apartment, and a petite blonde comes out and quickly locks the door behind her. She turns my way to leave, but her face goes pale.

"Tris."

She looks at the door. " I was just..."

I raise a brow awaiting her answer.

"He ... I..."

"I know about you ,Stiff. You had better watch her back here in Dauntless. You don't know who is watching or who is listening." I give her a warning with a low voice.

She just nods and scurries past me with flaming red cheeks. I look over my shoulder . She apparently does the same, but quickly averts her eyes. I brush it off and enter another hallway.


The dining hall is filled with Dauntless ,but I go to the same table with ease. Taking my seat, I notice the Stiff looking at me, but her gaze falls back on her empty plate.

"We have another meeting later." Max suddenly says . He sits across from me with a clean plate. I just sip on my water as he and the other person speak of useless crap.

Jeanine has joined forces with us ... or is using us to somehow devise a plan to abolish Abnegation. The two stiffs are lucky they transferred. Jeanine Matthews plans on creating some type of mind control serum to control the dauntless and use them for the elimination of the Abnegation. I have no absolute say in this since we technically have no choice, but it doesn't bother me at all. We are just removing a useless group of people. What is the harm in that?

I am pulled from my thoughts as Four enters the room. He and Tris have a little thing going on. They are just lucky I haven't said anything. I watch him approach her in a subtle way , but for some reason, I feel a tinge of hatred when he holds her hand under the table. I shake my head. You're letting your past get to you... I remind myself . Love is weakness. I stand up from the table and quickly leave the dining hall. As I enter the hallway the voices and noise dies down slowly as I go further and further away.

I revised this and ,may have to revise the whole thing!