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This is entry number one, by Kuro666.

Disclaimer: I do not own Beyblade. Nor the characters. Nor do i own this story (nor any OCs which may appear). But i do own thsi concept and i will seriously hunt people down if they use it without permission (or if it is used outside of this competition)

Added notes
- None of Kuro666's entry has been changed! It is purely her work!
- This contains yaoi of the Kai/Tala type!


Does this jumpsuit make me look sexy?
"Ewww… what the hell is this thing!" Ian spat out as soon as he saw the new offical abbey clothing that they were going to wear at the World Championship.

"Aww... crap! Do we really have to wear this shit!" Bryan glared at the 'clothes'.

"Calm down Bryan! Its only clothes, it can't look that bad on us." Tala said cheerfully.

"You might not mind because you are so female like." Bryan muttered.

"I heard that!" Tala glared playfully and almost tackled Bryan.

"Chill. Tala calm down he is just joking." Spencer said lightly from the bed where he was sitting on glaring at the 'clothes'.

"Yeah! I am just joking!" Bryan said then mouthed 'female' to Tala.

"Ugggg…" Tala groaned towards Bryan.

"Yo! Did you guys tried out the clothes yet?" Kai popped out from nowhere and asked his teammates.

"AHHHHHH!" Tala screamed surprised at hearing Kai's voice.

"O-kay…" Kai said looking at Tala weird.

"No! And I really don't want to put on this 'thing'" Ian said with disgusted.

"It's ugly." Spencer plainly stated after looking up from the hideous out fit.

"I fucking hate this thing whoever designed it, I swear I will hurt them!" Bryan growled.

"My Demolition Boys! How do you like my specially designed outfit for you guys?" Boris exclaimed from the door.

"Yeah! Specially designed for retards." Bryan said glaring at Boris.

"Now don't say that. Bryan! Because you will be wearing them to the World Championships! Isn't that great!" Boris said with enthusiastic.

"No." The Demolition Boys all flatly answered in unison.

"Fine be that way! Ta-ta boys! I got a little appointment with Voltaire." Boris said with a wave and left.

"That meeting can't be very innocent…" Kai said after the disappearing back of Boris. He then swing shut the door and plopped down on Tala's bed.

Bryan finally took the courage and took the 'clothes' out of the clear wrapping that it was in.

"Oh my fucking god! It is a jumpsuit!" Bryan shouted in horror.

"A jumpsuit!" Ian also screeched in terror. "But…but…but it can't be, I have never seen a jumpsuit wore on anybody and it looked good before…"

"Who cares about whether it looks good on us or not, the point is nobody have ever worn a jumpsuit since the last century." Bryan shot back.

"Well whether we like it or not, we will have to wear it." Spencer said.

Kai and Bryan started to curse in any colorful languages that they know of.

"I hate Boris." They all stated with glowing eyes.

XX A few hours later XX

"Hello boys!" Boris said entering their room with a messed up hair and open shirt. "Bryan, Ian and Spencer, you guys have beyblade practice right now. Kai, Tala, you guys need to come down to practice at 9:00 tonight."

"Hn." Kai said.

Bryan, Ian, and Spencer walked out and went down to the training rooms. The room became awfully quiet; it was filled with an uncomfortable silence. None of them had the courage to say something until…

"Do you think this jumpsuit will look good on me?" Tala asked while looking at his jumpsuit.

"Ummm…why don't you just try it on since nobody would?" Kai asked tearing his gaze off his book and on top Tala.

"Sure." Tala chirped and skipped into the washroom.

'He has such a sweet ass.' Kai thought staring at Tala's ass.

Tala striped naked and put the on jumpsuit, he looked in the mirror and a 17-year-old red haired boy stared back at him. He frowned at the jumpsuit and stepped out with a broad smile on his face.

Kai just stared.

X Kai's POV X

Oh my god, he is so sexy in it! The way the jumpsuit hugs his feminine curved hips, his muscles and his chest. The shirt fits him perfectly; all the right curves are shown. You can tell in an instant that he works out almost every single day. He is just so gorgeous. I just want to hold him in my arms and kiss those pink parted lips that he licks so every often. I just want to touch every single part of his body. My eyes wandered all over him and stopped right where the leg area is. The cloth were obviously too tight there. He was blushing when he realize where I was staring at, he is so cute when he blush. He just drives me insane!

"Kai! Can you please stop staring at me… I feel very uncomfortable…" Tala whined making me even more desperate for him.

"I like to stare at you…" I licked my lips.

He just blushed the color of his hair.

I stand up and walked towards him, he shifts uncomfortably.

"Do you like me?" I asked, I have to tell him how I feel towards him or else I will go insane.

I blushed and lowered my head.

X Tala's POV X

What? Did he just ask me do I like him! Hell yeah! I loved him the day we met at this abbey. My heart is racing and my face is burning up. I saw his crimson orbs, they were filled with fear, fear of rejection, and he feared that I don't feel the same for him. I had to tell him I felt the same way he feels for me. Suddenly I couldn't find my voice, so I just nodded, and that was enough for him. He pushed me on to one of the beds.

X Normal POV X

"I love you, Tala." Kai whispered.

"I fell in love with you the first time we met." Tala whispered back.

They both grinned.

"So… Does this jumpsuit make me look sexy?" Tala asked the boy on top of him.

"Very sexy… but I think you will look even more sexy without it." Kai smirked.

"I think you will be quite sexy too with out your shirt." Tala gave him an identical smirk.

"Well… let's see it, shall we?"


By Kuro666
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