my 1st labyrinth ff so please vbe nice
The time is come!
By time itself.
Time stands still for only one.
By the command of only one other.
The king of goblins!
The goblin king. Holds still time.
For a young maidens heart.
Yet her heart is caged.
He cannot reach unto her!
How devastated is he!
Poor king of goblins.
Poor goblin king!
How hurt is he.
His heart broken.
Ney!
Shattered it be.
Be it shards of frail glass or fine diamonds.
Shattered, nonetheless.
You!
King of goblins.
Goblin king.
Who can refill that void?
Left by the one you loved?
Be it she?
May she once again roam the underground?
Ney!
It cannot be!
Ney.
It is not so.
Might that young one there fill your heart?
Though your last unreturned love left it stoned and cold?
What?
What is that you say?
Me?
You say I am to heal your heart so cold?
Me?
Why me?
You feel my anger at her for leaving you broken and shattered.
You know of my wishing to make your life whole.
You know that I am in righteous place to mend your heart?
You know I am to love you.
What?
I missed that.
As well, you say?
What is that meaning; as well?
That you want my love in return for yours to me?
Why, I would love to!
King of goblins!
Goblin king!
My love!
My life!
My dearest loving dream come true!
King of goblins.
Goblin king.
The time is come!
Jareth!
My love!
The time!
Is come!
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